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thevera

Ours Is a Forbidden Love

Mar 07, 2010 02:26

Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Title: Ours Is a Forbidden Love
Summary: Three characters and their pieces of thoughts at one November evening.
Characters: Xander, Dawn, Giles
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3x200 = 600 (of sorts)
Author's Note: Written for Lovers Walk week @ fantas_magoria .
Disclaimer: *checks at the mirror* Nope, I'm not Joss Whedon.

( Xander's )

ficcing, dawn!verse haz dawn, buffy is love of my life, ch: dawn summers, ch: xander harris, ch: rupert giles, buffy:s3

Comments 15

buffyangellvr23 March 7 2010, 03:50:38 UTC

nice job :)

thevera March 7 2010, 12:50:21 UTC

Thanks!

ares132006 March 7 2010, 06:54:38 UTC

He was still sane enough to move his business as far from Sunnydale as possible. To actually make sure the kids knew where he was going, in case something bad happened on the Hellmouth (and it always did).

How honourable.

Oh Giles, still with the self recriminations.

Great Dawn voice, the typical younger sister.

And Xander stressing out about wanting Willow, while having Cordelia. Lovely insight to his muddled thoughts.

It was like if Buffy decided to make out with him while having this bizarre vampire romance with Angel. Sort of. And he so didn't want to get into that.

Oh man! That cracked me up.

thevera March 7 2010, 13:00:40 UTC

Great Dawn voice, the typical younger sister.

She is, now! *hugs Dawn*

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it'

rebcake March 7 2010, 08:22:24 UTC

I always get a kick out of seeing Dawn's perspective on the things that went on when she wasn't (really) there.

But this might be the first time I've seen anyone explore just what Giles was up to in Breaker's Woods. Cool!

thevera March 7 2010, 13:07:40 UTC

It's so much fun to insert Dawn pre-Season 5.

... and Giles... goes camping. at fantas_magoria actually inspired me to do it! Also, I'm a huge sucker for anything with Ethan lately, so...

Thank you!

sentine March 7 2010, 14:08:33 UTC

I love the three drabbles. Perfect voices for Xander and Dawn, and your take on Breaker's Woods is so interesting!

thevera March 7 2010, 15:51:10 UTC

Thank you! :)

brutti_ma_buoni March 7 2010, 16:08:18 UTC

Two of my favourite things here - fill in the blanks (and that is such a great reason for Giles just to go away for an episode), and Dawn insert. So glad you got inspired by this great episode!

thevera March 7 2010, 18:05:15 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!