Gray Morning Rewrite -- Chapter 5

[theun4givables]

If you're reading Gray Morning for the first time, previous chapters can be found here:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4Savin frowned, tapping his fingers on his knees as he watched the surrounding cityscape pass them by. He had never been on this side of the planet, before, not even when he used to travel with Jazz all the time. It was unfamiliar, both modern and

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[alien_writings]

Is the smoking thing going to cause problems between Jazz and Savin later on? I can't help feeling like that's just going to add fuel to the fire of dysfunction. O

And now we get the real confrontation with Mitchel! It seems less random this way, though he's no more pleasant this time, haha.

I was amused when Jazz used fake sleep to avoid dealing with Mitchel. :)

[theun4givables]

It so is going to cause problems between them. Or well, it'll definitely put more fuel on the fire, at least. With Savin it's more of a stress response, though, so as the book goes on, he's going to do it more and more....

And yes! It feels like it was meant to go here. For many reasons why, that I'm not ready to reveal, just yet. ;)

Jazz is a crafy one, sometimes.