Comments | thetoastbox: Stay With Me Tonight

thetoastbox

Stay With Me Tonight

Sep 02, 2009 19:27

( You died in a carcrash, and that's the stupidest way to die. )

length: oneshot, genre: angst, pairing: jaejoong/yoochun, dbsk, rating: pg

Comments 7

yoochunlove September 2 2009, 18:20:20 UTC

this. this is so ♥.

+adding to memories ♥

thetoastbox September 3 2009, 12:34:34 UTC

♥ Thank you! :D
Glad you like it~!

juhli September 2 2009, 22:04:50 UTC

:(

so sad...i liked how you built up the story...the first thing i was wodnering was why yoochun is not there anymore...and then i was frightened that jae would also die in a car crash...but the last sentence made it so sad and heartbreaking for me T_____T

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juhli September 3 2009, 14:22:35 UTC

No, i think it was exactly the right way how you ended!!
Sometimes it's more difficult to live on than to die, right?

thetoastbox September 3 2009, 12:33:53 UTC

): Sorry for breaking your heart!
(do you think it would be better if I made jae die in the carcrash? LOL)

Thank you for reading, juhli! ♥

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thetoastbox September 13 2009, 07:13:36 UTC

;__;

Thank you for liking! ♥

in_hyeong December 6 2010, 15:16:04 UTC

JaeChun - A transitional relationship. ♥

Poor jae. TT_TT Melancholic state of mind, and heart.

WRITE A YUNJAE SEQUEL BASED ON THIS! LOL.