First Days (Coffee Fix 'verse)

Jun 10, 2010 21:48

Title: First Days
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,212
Description: Three first days of school. ( Coffee Fix ‘verse)
A/N: I couldn’t figure out whether this was one ficlet or three. It’s kind of both.

So just look at them and sigh )

ficlet, rpf, fic, series: coffee fix, pinto

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 17:29:11 UTC
first comment as always!

the coffee seemed fitting. oooh, i should get a coffee icon! and yeah, they had some rough times :-( poor boys. thanks :-D

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screamlet June 11 2010, 01:59:59 UTC
Ughhhh oh my god dude the first and second parts had me TEARING UP askjhdf HOW DO YOU DO THIS.

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 17:30:02 UTC
i don't know how i do it! but i'm secretly very proud :-) thanks for commenting!!!

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lavender_basil June 11 2010, 02:11:18 UTC
Woah! This was fantastic. And heartbreaking. And raw.

OMG, Chris' reaction to Zach's date *killed* me. You are so good at nailing real emotions and NOTHING is worse than finding out the person you love/loved has started dating again.

Also, I think Chris/Zach/Coffee is my new OT3. And I don't do OT3s ;)

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 17:31:33 UTC
thanks so much, wow! i was really hoping the mix of emotions would come across in this, so i'm glad to see it worked.

and yes, pinto and coffee go together so well, don't they?

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anodrethlluvine June 11 2010, 02:24:34 UTC
The rollercoaster's back- whee!

I love the depth in this, and the confusion. Zach's mini-panic in the car was deliciously angst-ridden, but also realistic. The fact that they were able to keep it together in front of the boys is great!

As always, ending on a high note- Chris is so mischievous!

Great chapter, bb!

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 17:32:42 UTC
thanks so much! i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. it seems to be all that i hoped for (rollercoaster and realism and high note ending included!)

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the_deep_magic June 11 2010, 04:37:44 UTC
Ah, lovely! The tension between them is really well done, painful but understated. Zach thinking back to happier times really got to me. But yay for peace offerings of coffee!

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:11:46 UTC
thanks soooo much! that is exactly what i was going for! all of those things you said! so yay!

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