First Days (Coffee Fix 'verse)

Jun 10, 2010 21:48

Title: First Days
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,212
Description: Three first days of school. ( Coffee Fix ‘verse)
A/N: I couldn’t figure out whether this was one ficlet or three. It’s kind of both.

So just look at them and sigh )

ficlet, rpf, fic, series: coffee fix, pinto

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foom101 June 11 2010, 06:14:05 UTC
OMG. Don't ever stop. This was lovely and so fucking painful. I LOVE this series!! <3 I keep saying that over and over again.
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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:13:15 UTC
if i ever stop, i think i'll have to hide in fear of the angry mobs that would come knocking at my door ;-) (that said, someone please tell me when these start sucking / getting annoying. i'd rather quit while i'm ahead. but not yet....)

anyway, thanks for your loyal readership and continuing enthusiasm :-D

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easilymused1956 June 11 2010, 06:16:34 UTC
The love is still there even through the worst parts. Or Chris wouldn't care. And Zach wouldn't be sorry.

Love seeing the boys.

Renee

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:14:09 UTC
you're right, the love is still there. which makes it even worse :-( thanks for the comment!

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molleo June 11 2010, 11:41:59 UTC
Oh, so good, bb, as usual. What an awesome 'verse. I love sinking into it each and every time. Thank you!

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:14:37 UTC
thanks so much!

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inpurity June 11 2010, 13:24:30 UTC
Oh my God, so much love for this verse! The first one totally broke my heart, but it was so familiar in the terrible ache about losing track of what real happiness is, about realising that somewhere down the road something got broken and not having a clue about how to fix it.
I really love this family, their heartache, how at first glance Zach is the asshole, but you know that is not just 1 person's fault. I love that even in between pain and regrets and hurt they both try so hard for their kids' sake.

This will stay with me for a long, long time.

I'm actually tearing up.

Laila

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:25:57 UTC
aww, i didn't mean to make you tear up (or maybe i did?) ;-)

have i mentioned that i love your comments and insights about this 'verse? two things in particular that you mentioned - you know that is not just 1 person's fault and they both try so hard for their kids' sake have been so important to me in writing this whole story, and i'm so glad that it's coming through and is believable and real and something that people are observing and enjoying and commenting on.

you flatter and inspire me. thanks so much.

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leopardchic79 June 11 2010, 13:33:29 UTC
Ack. Inappropriate work tears!! lol I may be overly emotional right now & probably knew better & shouldn't have read this at work but pshaw, I have no will power to resist this 'verse! :)

Lovely as always even if it did make me teary-eyed!

xo

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therumjournals June 12 2010, 18:27:10 UTC
awwww! i'm sorry! i should have put a "you might cry" warning on this one, apparently ;-) but i'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless, and i plan to keep drawing you back in! thanks!

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