State of Mind (A Star Trek RPF Fanfic)

[therumjournals]

Title: State of Mind
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,800
Description: Chris comes to New York City, and Zach isn’t happy about it.
Warnings: fighting, hate speech, unprotected sex
A/N: I wrote this for halfbreedchild, because her flailing comments are my oxygen, and therefore I am her bitch. ILU AND YOUR DEMENTED

Comments

[ladyblahblah]

DAMN IT!

*wibbles*

Well, I hope you're happy.

This was heartbreaking and hot and sweet and I AM ALL TEARY-EYED BECAUSE OF YOU, WOMAN! *sniffles* Man. So good.

[therumjournals]

ha ha, wooohoo! success! so glad you liked this and sorry that i keep making you cry. i'll try to stop. wait, what am i saying, no i won't! :-D

[nudeonthemoon]

Damn, you write their fights so well-- its incredible and heart wrenching. What else I love about your fic is that, oft times, people write Chris as an asshole but you write Zach as equally an asshole and that seems really true to me. Anyway. Awesome fic, you always make it so hot at the end!

[therumjournals]

thanks so much for this comment! it's so hard for me to make either of them assholes! i feel like i read more fic where zach is the asshole, actually, and that came more easily to me when i was writing this. but in the end i wanted them both to hold their own and i hope i succeeded.

[therumjournals]

omg, the fight killed me, too! you should have seen this when i started writing it, it was all zach railing and chris and chris being like *whimper*. i think i made chris a lot stronger in end so don't feel too bad for him ;-) but i'm glad you liked this and THANKS!

[gryffin_draco]

That was so freaking hot! And the ending was win. Thank you for sharing ^^

[therumjournals]

thanks! so much! i had to rework the ending a couple times, so i'm glad you liked it!

[therumjournals]

angsty and wonderful and a messed up kind of awesome - i take that as a huge compliment, so THANK YOU :-D probably won't be returning to this 'verse as it took a lot out of me! but halfbreedchild suggested a prequel, so maybe....