State of Mind (A Star Trek RPF Fanfic)

[therumjournals]

Title: State of Mind
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,800
Description: Chris comes to New York City, and Zach isn’t happy about it.
Warnings: fighting, hate speech, unprotected sex
A/N: I wrote this for halfbreedchild, because her flailing comments are my oxygen, and therefore I am her bitch. ILU AND YOUR DEMENTED

Comments

[frauleinl]

*OMFG!~ This was... Oh, my! I was screaming IRL thru the whole fight part, it felt so real, then OMG, Central Park is soooo... OMG *flails* This was amazing!! You're so full of wins!

“Not just mine,” Zach reminded him, tugging his t-shirt collar down with his teeth to lick at his chest. “It’s yours that’s sliding down my legs right now.”

THIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[therumjournals]

thanks for the flail and the love :-D i'm glad both the fight and the hotness worked for you, and yeah, that was a pretty popular line! who knew?!

[tpinto]

Twas Awesome!

[therumjournals]

THANKS :-D

[ilmatarlady]

I was brokenhearted halfway through and in need of a change of panties by the end of it all and you, ma'am, are a genius.
Men and their manfeelings, and Zach and his pretend-toughness and the I'll-hurt-you-so-you'll-hate-me strategy which is pretty much the dumbest thing ever thought of by humankind; and Chris not believing any of that bullshit? ♥ I love it that Chris stood his ground and saw through Zach's anxiousness.
And their solution? PERFECT.
And holy hell, that was eye-watering hot!

[therumjournals]

thanks thanks thanks!! it seems like all the emotions i was trying to put in here really hit home, which i love. especially chris standing his ground - that was important to me so i'm glad it came through and people enjoyed it.

[lindarella123]

WOW. That was inspired. Loved it from top to bottom. The fight was so real. The sex even better. Public sex -- off the charts. Great job.

[therumjournals]

thanks! i have to write some crack soon or something, everything i'm writing recently is too real! (but i know that's a good thing). but perhaps public sex will be making more appearances - seems like it's as popular with other people as it is in my mind :-)

[missestrella]

SWEET, SWEET ANGST!!! This was so amazing as so hot, dear lord...*wipes face*
I'm completely STUNNED how you where able to make their fight seem so intense for such a big part of the story! I often go 'blah' when I read banter that just goes on and on with no real conclusion, but YOU TOTALLY MADE IT WORK! *applaudes*
Now I'm gonna go off and have a look at those park pictures again and flail and blush happily ever after!

Btw, Do I need to mention that I'm bookmarking this like hell? ♥

[therumjournals]

yaaaay!! i'm so so glad you liked this, bb :-) and that you didn't go "blah" during the fight, heh :-) and yeah, i won't even be able to think of central park - or rocks - or trees - without blushing now. THANKS :-D