Fanfiction: In Another World

[ikui]

Title: In Another World (Part 2/3)
Genre: Drama/AU
Rating: R
Pairing: Jongyu and Ontae
Summary: They were too similar, and they were too different. He was stuck between two choices even though the answer should have been obvious.
A/N: 7243 words, mature language, death.

Previous: Part 1

Comments

[bffimagine]

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I don't even know who to feel sorriest for---I'll settle on Key because poor guy is trying to make everything better and everything just gets worse :(

Thanks for sharing!

[ikui]

They are all in a pretty bad place. D:
But yeah, I feel pretty bad for Key too.

Thank you for the comment!

[hikasai]

:O This story is really intense!

I'm not sure If I get all of it X'D
But why is Jonghyun like that? :(
I wonder what happened, and what will happen to Jonghyun and Taemin! Don't kill Taemin ; ___ ;

lol, I can't wait for the 3rd part! :D

[ikui]

Ughgughg... I know this fic is so confusing and I feel so bad but I edited it so many times that I got too lazy to do it again and just posted. I am a bad author but I'll try to fix it in the future. ;_;

If there is something that you really don't get, I can explain it to you?
I was trying to portray that Jonghyun kind of felt emotionally burnt out, and that basically Onew acting so differently shook his system? Or something? fml

Lastly... I uh, the third part. Yeah not telling! Thank you! XP

[chinagirl4evr]

I love you so much. I was waiting for this for days. I absolutely love it! I feel like I am reading a novel. You have also mixed my feelings for the pairings. I feel sorry for all the characters. It is like there will be no happy ending. I hope that is not true. Thank you so much for updating :)

*I baked you big warm chocolate cookies*

[ikui]

It is like there will be no happy ending.

... /runs away

/runs back and snatches a cookie before running away again

[chinagirl4evr]

NOOOOO.....hopefully it not too bad. Maybe bittersweet? *puppy eyes*

[ex_argh]

:( dsjkfhjkdskfs omgggggggggg this fic is just so amazing ;__; fjsdjkfhskd sooooo sad *weeps* jfkgfkdh I feel so sad for everyone^^;;

ah I really want to know about Key @@ like what is he? XDDD

and I guess this has a sad ending? T______T *goes and cries* but I still love this ;_; I was waiting for it ♥♥♥
so thank you ;_; and I'll um wait for the next part patiently
♥

[ikui]

KEY IS A SPIRIT PIXIE. Um... Well actually it will probably remain mostly a mystery of who he is cause I am bad like that. XP

And yes, sad ending. I don't know how to make this fic end happily. :(

Thank you!!!

[ex_argh]

oh ok XDDDD 8D spirit pixie it is then :D

yeah I know what you mean T_T someone will end up sad ~ unless you like make Jjong and Minho like each other ahahaha :D
♥ its okay~ I love this fic ;_; even if it sad~ its so beautiful and wonderful *waits for the next part* :D
♥

[intoxicatedbrat]

Yay my personal santa, you updated! ^^

I've figured out how you named them Juls and Yous! From how you described them. Juls from SHINee's Juliette concept and Yous from their concept in the Y.O.U. album. >.< Am i right? but WOOTS~ that's so cool of you

[ikui]

LOL Oh man someone caught on to my JulsYous thing. Haha I am so not creative but you are right. /sobs

Everyone is pretty much broken... Everything is spiraling down to an end. :(
Haha I was considering actually making Ontae elope but I didn't think it would make much sense.

I am glad Key is so Key! I thought I might have screwed that up haha. But no, he isn't a time traveler lol.

You'll see what happens when I update! Thaaanks!