Fanfiction: In Another World

Apr 11, 2010 19:40

Title: In Another World (Part 2/3)
Genre: Drama/AU
Rating: R
Pairing: Jongyu and Ontae
Summary: They were too similar, and they were too different. He was stuck between two choices even though the answer should have been obvious.
A/N: 7243 words, mature language, death.

Previous: Part 1

If there was a choice, Jinki would have ignored his consciousness pulling at the edges of his mind, coaxing him to awaken. )

pairing: ontae, rating: r, shinee, !fanfiction, pairing: jongyu, ikui

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intoxicatedbrat April 12 2010, 11:40:13 UTC
Yay my personal santa, you updated! ^^

I've figured out how you named them Juls and Yous! From how you described them. Juls from SHINee's Juliette concept and Yous from their concept in the Y.O.U. album. >.< Am i right? but WOOTS~ that's so cool of you!

And part 2.. gosh I dont know where to begin. Jonghyun's broken, and what he did to Jinki broke their best-friendship. D: And also broke Jinki. So tragic! And Jonghyun has no idea what's happening to Jinki, plus he might be the cause of it, so he's frustrated, am i right?

Taemin.. T.T I wonder what his punishment was. *sobs* poor baby. And he's just as smitten as Jinki. Go elope already~! :/

Key. Is so KEY. He's one mysterious character. I cant seem to figure who he is. He's like someone from the future, a time when both Juls and Yous live in harmony, where they procreate and people like him were born. And he went back in time to make sure the future's right.

i really like the dynamics of the Jonghyun-Jinki relationship. :D
and omg the blast. O.O what'll happen to the people outside? Taemin..? and Minho? T.T

looking forward to next update bb! <3

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ikui April 16 2010, 15:53:33 UTC
LOL Oh man someone caught on to my JulsYous thing. Haha I am so not creative but you are right. /sobs

Everyone is pretty much broken... Everything is spiraling down to an end. :(
Haha I was considering actually making Ontae elope but I didn't think it would make much sense.

I am glad Key is so Key! I thought I might have screwed that up haha. But no, he isn't a time traveler lol.

You'll see what happens when I update! Thaaanks!

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