Kanjani8 - A Little Comfort - Yoko/Maru, Subaru/Yasu

Apr 08, 2008 01:03

Title: A Little Comfort
Fandom: Kanjani8
Rating: R
Pairing: Yoko/Maru, Subaru/Yasu
Disclaimer: This is a fictional situation that never happened.
Notes: This is the longest fic I've ever written. XD Thank you Gen and Ilana for the hand holding. ♥

A Little Comfort )

yoko, yasu, maru, subaru/yasu, subaru, yoko/maru, kanjani8

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ohmiya_sg April 8 2008, 15:48:45 UTC
crap. class. erm. Awesome fic! Yoko should take over the fic scene. XD

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airairo April 8 2008, 21:24:36 UTC
Oh man. I agree! XD Yoko is wonderful. *_*

Glad you liked the fic! ♥

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pinkpapyrus April 8 2008, 23:21:10 UTC
First of all, *_____*

Second, ... no wait, I'll have something.

Good LORD, woman, I love your stories. :) I was telling Kei, your voice is very strong and I always get a sense of afternoon in your stories. Very casual, comfortable. I love it. :)

And this. So much love for this.

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airairo April 10 2008, 04:12:18 UTC
Thank you, love! So much! ♥♥

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mujun April 10 2008, 04:35:42 UTC
Oh, this is one of those that are so special I don't have words. I'm sorry.

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airairo April 11 2008, 04:10:47 UTC
Awww, thank you! *beams* ♥

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ceathair April 11 2008, 03:50:28 UTC
Eh! I can't believe I missed it! I was complaining to Gen that the fandom was a bit boring fic wise, there's not a whole lot that are good but I overlooked this gem?!!

It was awesome, really. I love Maru, and the way you write him, the tension with Subaru, the awkwardness between all of them. Ohkura being at the concert, Hina gossiping ! However, is it just me or Ryo is never mentionned? Ahh, who cares, the story was too awesome to bother with the details the main point is Yoko is hot, Maru's awesome and so are you. XD

I have to clue how to do hearts at all, so here, ¾ of my good mood is because I've read this story. (the missing fourth of tonight'S happiness is the cookies I ate while reading)

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airairo April 11 2008, 04:13:40 UTC
sdlksdj Kath. ♥ I was just telling Gen that I take it as a high compliment that you used an emoticon. XD

And, augh, I feel bad for leaving Ryo out but I was sure that I had him in here somewhere! Oops. XD I'm so glad you liked the fic! Thanks so much!! ♥♥

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ceathair April 11 2008, 04:22:10 UTC
Yes, me using an emoticon is something rare, and to be cherished! It doesn't really bother that Ryo's missing, it was when I wrote the review, picturing each of them that I went, 1-2-3-4-5-6 ? But Maru was too cute and he was trying so hard to get through his situation that I also forgot about Ryo.

I did get a sense of afternoon which sound really weird at first, but I could feel sunlight while reading, it was very strange considering that it's pitch black outside. You play so much with atmosphere that I couldn't help but feel it as one would feel the weather.

You're welcome, continue writing, it brings happinness to ppl's lives! I hope I don't sound too Hallmark-y.

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ashura_unnie May 20 2008, 10:44:57 UTC
wow I liked it !!!
That's the first time I've read a Yoko/Maru pairing but this was really good ! Well your Subassan fics are good so why would i change for another pairing ?
I liked how you expressed Maru's confusion and feelings and I love how it's all really relaxed and sometimes gives a smooth feeling !

Thanks ^^

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