Title: A Little Comfort
Fandom: Kanjani8
Rating: R
Pairing: Yoko/Maru, Subaru/Yasu
Disclaimer: This is a fictional situation that never happened.
Notes: This is the longest fic I've ever written. XD Thank you Gen and Ilana for the hand holding. ♥
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Glad you liked the fic! ♥
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Second, ... no wait, I'll have something.
Good LORD, woman, I love your stories. :) I was telling Kei, your voice is very strong and I always get a sense of afternoon in your stories. Very casual, comfortable. I love it. :)
And this. So much love for this.
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It was awesome, really. I love Maru, and the way you write him, the tension with Subaru, the awkwardness between all of them. Ohkura being at the concert, Hina gossiping ! However, is it just me or Ryo is never mentionned? Ahh, who cares, the story was too awesome to bother with the details the main point is Yoko is hot, Maru's awesome and so are you. XD
I have to clue how to do hearts at all, so here, ¾ of my good mood is because I've read this story. (the missing fourth of tonight'S happiness is the cookies I ate while reading)
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And, augh, I feel bad for leaving Ryo out but I was sure that I had him in here somewhere! Oops. XD I'm so glad you liked the fic! Thanks so much!! ♥♥
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I did get a sense of afternoon which sound really weird at first, but I could feel sunlight while reading, it was very strange considering that it's pitch black outside. You play so much with atmosphere that I couldn't help but feel it as one would feel the weather.
You're welcome, continue writing, it brings happinness to ppl's lives! I hope I don't sound too Hallmark-y.
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That's the first time I've read a Yoko/Maru pairing but this was really good ! Well your Subassan fics are good so why would i change for another pairing ?
I liked how you expressed Maru's confusion and feelings and I love how it's all really relaxed and sometimes gives a smooth feeling !
Thanks ^^
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