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Jan 11, 2010 23:26

endings, Ten/Rose, pg-13
The stars were out in the sky, but they both made a habit of not looking up at them. They were different, foreign, he told her when she asked. They looked different; they looked strange, all in the wrong place in the sky., 4139 words ( Read more... )

challenge 22, :dashafeather

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morrighangw January 11 2010, 23:35:16 UTC
*WIBBLE* This is quite a lovely but angsty twist on Doomsday. Oh, if only.

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 10:18:00 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it. ♥

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 10:19:51 UTC
Aw, sorry. I hope it didn't hurt too much. ♥♥ =D

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 19:12:00 UTC
Oh thank you so much. It's your favourite DD fic? Hee. Thanks ever so much! You've no idea how much your comments made me smile!

I was going to make the Doctor say Ilu back, but I thought it would be a bit more... idk, canon? heartbreaking? (lol) if he didn't, I think...

And thanks for mentioning the end, it was something I wasn't entirely sure about! I'm so glad you liked it.

Ooh, I can't wait to see what you've come up with!

Thanks again for awesome feedback. *hugs* ♥ ♥

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orange_crushed January 11 2010, 23:57:49 UTC
...and she’s left holding hands with nothing but air.

I SUSPECTED THIS WAS COMING THE WHOLE TIME AND YET STILL I FEEL AMBUSHED, AND AM CRYING.

This is a sign that you've done your job well. It breaks my heart to think of all their time, lost. Their last conversation pretty much broke my heart in half.

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 10:20:52 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. =D I'm so pleased you liked, and apologies for making you cry. Hee. ♥

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beauty_within16 January 12 2010, 00:04:52 UTC
That was so sad, but beautiful. I loved it.

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 10:21:26 UTC
Thank you. xD

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erateini January 12 2010, 00:06:26 UTC
...'she’s left holding hands with nothing but air.' That.Was.Painful!
Also the Doctor never utters the words 'I love you' back. Double ouch!

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dashafeather January 12 2010, 10:22:26 UTC
Eep. Sorry about that. I wanted to keep it as close to canon as possible, so you know.

Thanks for commenting. =D ♥

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