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Nov 20, 2011 19:30

The Girl in the Garden: A Fairytale, Doctor/Rose, All ages
All his life they told him, "Don't go down to the gates, and do not go outside.  Outside, there are monsters, and terrors, and the Big Bad Wolf waits to devour you.", 2570 words

A/N: The thing about writing a fairytale is the Rule of Threes.  So thanks, three times, to seeing_history for the beta, and to ( Read more... )

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fannishliss November 21 2011, 00:47:51 UTC
nice fairy tale! I love how Rose is waiting in the Garden -- how she leaves, and how he will always find her again. :)

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bloose09 November 21 2011, 03:25:30 UTC
I really like how you have intertwined the Bad Wolf throughout the Doctor's life. How the Bad Wolf has called to him from the beginning, took an active part in making him the being that he is, gave him his name, and quest.

I loved your description of the TARDIS It opened up, the very trunk of the tree sliding away to reveal a shadowy interior, and when he stepped inside, he was in a world he knew. The ivory towers had trees like this one, though none of the corridors within echoed with hints of a lover's laughter. The tree was no tree at all. It was a ship.

I think you should volunteer to write the much rumored 'start from scratch' Doctor Who movie. Really.

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mae_stark November 21 2011, 04:24:46 UTC

I second this. You would make that movie awesome.

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mae_stark November 21 2011, 04:23:25 UTC

Ohh my goodnesss skshshskwjsgsusosmsmwkwoowoeuebrbdddkeiepwlsmsjheeuehhdieownsjsjei! This was so amazing, I can't even...

This was so beautiful. I love the imagery and detail you put into this, it really makes it. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for this!

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spellweaver731 November 21 2011, 04:30:33 UTC
This was beautiful. A lovely re-telling of the Doctor and Rose story as a fairy-tale :)

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someplacetobe November 21 2011, 12:57:25 UTC
This was a gorgeous fairytale!

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