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jessalrynn in then_theres_us

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Mar 26, 2011 15:39

Beadazzled, Nine/Rose, ADULT
He was about to spontaneously combust and nothing in all the cosmos was going to save him.
4,967 words

A/N: Special thanks to seeing_history for chucking a pencil at me.

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haveloved March 28 2011, 00:24:55 UTC

Ugh, wow, Nine's sexual frustration was hilarious and so so so palpable at the same time. Everything about this was hot.

I loved that he laughed in relief once Rose mentioned the bed--that even after all that, he still has that tiniest bit of insecurity that maybe it was a one-off thing. And that he recognizes that Rose's little domestic adventures before she met him are just as amazing as the ones she's had traveling with him.

How could one small blonde human being find so many different ways to wander off in one lifetime? And yeah, that about sums Rose up. ;) Lovely!

develish1 March 28 2011, 01:30:20 UTC

how do you get that much hot, and that much humour, oh and did I mention all THE HOT! into a story?

*grabs fan*

I think perhaps I need a little lie down now, if you'll excuse me....

jer832 March 28 2011, 02:57:41 UTC

Everyone has raved about and quoted just about everything in your story, and I agree with all of the above. I need to rave about the trademarked Cunning Plot and Devious Trap, the number one stop for their bus tours, and (perhaps especially) the unabridged catalog of dooms as well. Reasons your Nine is the hottest, in addition to description that gives new meaning to "Fahrenheit 451": your sense of humour, perfect turn of phrase, tongue so perfectly in cheek, and galaxy-sized talent.

I usually carry a copy of Tangled up In Blue, to read whenever I can get out of doing whatever other people stupidly think I should be doing instead, so I don't know if I can agree with emraldeyedauter. I'm going to have so much fun (not to mention the guh response) getting the answer.

eskridge77 March 28 2011, 04:27:36 UTC

Um... yes... well...

Target heart rate achieved for the day. And probably for tomorrow, too.

*is rather warm*

amberfocus March 28 2011, 09:32:16 UTC

Oh, such gorgeous descriptions. You put me right in the room with them. Lovely and breathtaking love scene.