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Mar 26, 2011 15:39

Beadazzled, Nine/Rose, ADULT
He was about to spontaneously combust and nothing in all the cosmos was going to save him.
4,967 words

A/N: Special thanks to seeing_history  for chucking a pencil at me.

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:jessalrynn, challenge 71

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ms_sardonicus March 26 2011, 20:28:05 UTC
Simply gorgeous! You have such a way with words. They throw me right into the moment and damning the reality around me. I'm loving this Nine week and am so glad you participated!

Loved this bit:
She had been formed with an absolute arsenal of beauty, inside and out, and then to seal his fate, her smile, just for him, with her tongue peeking out through her slightly parted lips, was like lethe, offering forgetfulness of all his sins in the bestowed mercy of her kiss.

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wander_realtai March 26 2011, 20:39:01 UTC
Oh... wow... was this ever hot! *fans self*

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sweetevangeline March 26 2011, 20:53:33 UTC
Doomed, doomed, doomed, he thought, morosely.

Oh, that made me laugh...

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bratflorida March 26 2011, 20:58:49 UTC
Oh. My. God! I actually was stunned when I finished this, it's THAT good!

I love this so much I don't even know how to express it! THIS!

>>“I don’t even want to know what I’ll do if I get it wet.”

He’d wondered silently what she’d do if he got her wet.

“If we end up running for our lives, I’m gonna be naked, because this thing’s as flimsy as tissue paper.”

His brain had immediately started rooting around for reasons why they should run for their lives.

“And heaven only knows how I’m gonna get out of it without shredding it to ribbons.”... )

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zazie11 March 26 2011, 21:50:51 UTC
Incredulously, he demanded, “Rose Tyler, are you tryin’ to provoke me?”

“All the time, Doctor,” she replied saucily, “all the time.” Her voice dropped low and husky, inviting and compelling. “Is it working?” Her tongue was back in her teeth.

Funny and sexy, sweet and hot. Sweet Pete, girl - you've given me the vapors! :D

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