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Oct 11, 2010 15:10

and the stars will guide you home Doctor/Rose, R
It surprises her, sometimes, how young she is. She stares at her hands and thinks: Twenty-three. I am twenty-three. (924 words)

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:the_idiotgirl, challenge 53

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professor_spork October 11 2010, 22:20:53 UTC
This is awesome. I love the frank realism of it; the violence of the jumps. Gorgeous.

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:08:28 UTC
:)

Thank you.

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takethewords October 11 2010, 22:43:01 UTC
This is gorgeous and real and it hurts and oh, Rose. I love every interaction here with everyone, especially the one with Tony. And God, every time she finds the Doctor.

This is just how it would be. Beautiful.

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:09:22 UTC
Aw, thanks for the kind words.

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kremlindusk October 11 2010, 22:44:44 UTC
This is fantastic. I love these bleak, "Rose is going through hell to get back to the Doctor" stories. Amazing job. Bravo!

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:09:58 UTC
:D

Thank you very much.

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:10:28 UTC
Oh, you made me blush. Thanks for reading.

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thenakedcupcake October 12 2010, 00:18:58 UTC
I love the detachment. Looking at her hands, a mantra of her age. I love the abrupt breaks in each moment, harsh just like her landings. I love that she lies to Tony, even when its the truth. I love that she likes Eleven's bowtie. I love that you show Jackie break, just as a mother would, even while Rose refuses to. It twists my heart that she said she knew the Doctor loved her in past tense when she meets Ten. I love that when she meets him, he already loves her, and knows he's a silly git who didn't say it.

This is starting to feel like I'm writing wedding vows. That's cool, I think I'd marry this fic. Its simply made of friggin awesome.

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:12:46 UTC
Glad you enjoyed this.

Also, my fic dreams of a Spring wedding. Just, FYI.

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thenakedcupcake October 12 2010, 04:25:45 UTC
Done. As long as your fic and I get a ridiculous cake.

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