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Oct 11, 2010 15:10

and the stars will guide you home Doctor/Rose, R
It surprises her, sometimes, how young she is. She stares at her hands and thinks: Twenty-three. I am twenty-three. (924 words)

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:the_idiotgirl, challenge 53

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rosa_acicularis October 12 2010, 00:28:36 UTC
“When I held you for the first time, you where so small. And I thought, oh, I thought that I knew what love was. I was crazy about your father. But you. You changed everything.”

Stunning. Just stunning.

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the_idiotgirl October 12 2010, 04:15:59 UTC
Thanks. But the credit to those words goes to my mother, who told them to my sister and me constantly as we were growing up. Along with 'you will never know what real love is until you have a child.'

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psyfi_geekgirl October 12 2010, 07:40:19 UTC
Ooooh, nice! All of these for 53 are coming out beautifully!
The unpredictability or Rose's jumps reminds me of Time Traveler's Wife--with very cool results!
Well done!

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spellweaver731 October 17 2010, 21:26:06 UTC
Very nice. There is something so painfully real in this fic. I love it!

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loverly October 24 2010, 15:21:29 UTC
oh man, the last bit made me cry :(

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