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marcasite in then_theres_us

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Jul 22, 2009 11:30

protest this hate of mine; mickey, (rose/ten); pg
post-girl in the fireplace, Mickey's POV (hope this is ok!)
He wants to twist the edge of her hurt and make her feel a little of what it’s been like for him all this time., 721 words

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challenge 05, :marcasite

Comments 14

orange_crushed July 22 2009, 16:30:52 UTC

It's a very thoughtful perspective, to write from Mickey's pov, and it works perfectly for this prompt. Your Mickey is good and kind and flawed and very real.

Sad and sweet. :)

marcasite July 22 2009, 23:59:05 UTC

Thank you so much. I love your writing so I really appreciate that you read and left a lovely comment. Thanks!

mingsmommy July 22 2009, 16:48:32 UTC

I am continually amazed, though I don't watch this show, how you manage to let me know what's going on both within the character and around them.

Beautiful. Really.

marcasite July 23 2009, 00:00:30 UTC

Ah, wow! You don't watch the show and read this? That's lovely. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Thank you!

redheadedali July 22 2009, 17:53:44 UTC

Aww, poor Mickey. He's such a sweetheart.

marcasite July 23 2009, 00:01:19 UTC

Poor Mickey. He does deserve a lot! Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment!

wintergreen126 July 23 2009, 03:23:50 UTC

i love when you explore mickey's perspective, because he's very much the observer. mickey often does and says goofy stuff, but looking at his face, you know he knows what's going on, he knows what's being left unsaid. and here you have him making a sort of peace with who and what he is to rose.

really lovely, michelle! thanks for sharing :o)

marcasite July 23 2009, 17:44:52 UTC

Jealousy can be the type of emotion that can change the essence of who you are. I am so glad that Mickey came out for the better. I like to think that he was jealous but it wasn't the root of what he felt when he was with them.

Thanks for reading, love

hermione_cat July 23 2009, 12:39:40 UTC

Lovely.
Poor Mickey :(

I never understood how Rose seemed to pass over the fact that the Doctor was so prepared to leave her and so easily for the Pompadour hussy... it didn't seem to sit right. Unless... when he left her and came back, he realised what he'd done and the potential consequences of losing her, and realising how big a mistake he could have made, led to their relationship deepening and developing that bit further.

A sort of turning point?

I don't know but well done :)

marcasite July 23 2009, 17:45:50 UTC

Ah, thank you so much. I liked to think Rose learned alot during this experience, about her and the Doctor.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a nice comment!