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raysgal in then_theres_us

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Sep 25, 2010 12:48

Starting Over, TenII/Rose, PG-13
Never more than that. Or any less. Occasionally she could make out dried tear drops, but there were a number of reasons a person would cry. Rose wasn’t going to presume they were about her. She merely pushed the thoughts aside and went to work each day as though she still needed Torchwood to help her find the Doctor ( Read more... )

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juliet316 September 25 2010, 18:13:27 UTC

Very nice and bittersweet with a hopeful ending.

develish1 September 25 2010, 18:22:50 UTC

Nice :) I much prefer the more realistic "it takes work" stories of TenII/Rose than the rose tinted "it's all instantly perfect" variety.

eskridge77 September 25 2010, 19:21:30 UTC

First thought... mental image of a scruffy looking, backpack bearing, jeans-n-hoodie wearing TenToo, standing in a doorway...

Really difficult to get past that, at the mo... give me a minute...

Okay, second thought... I can absolutely buy into the idea that TenToo would run. And that he would come back because he is Ten and she's Rose. And good on her for making him walk on hot coals for a bit!

spellweaver731 September 26 2010, 04:07:32 UTC

I really, really liked this. They would have a lot to deal with and I can see the Doctor freaking out and running because the is what the Doctor does. And Rose forgives him because that is what she does. No matter where they are they are still the Doctor and Rose and I like the hopeful feel this fic left off with, the idea that it will take work but they can make it.

someplacetobe September 26 2010, 14:22:39 UTC

I liked the hopeful ending to this and good on 'er for making him wait.