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Apr 23, 2010 01:56

5 Times the Doctor and Rose got caught out in a snowstorm....(and one time they didn't.), Ten/Rose, Ten II/Rose, R.

“It’s like the stars are falling.” She whispers, because somehow in the silence of the snowflakes, speaking loudly seems wrong. Like they’re in a giant library at the heart of a kingdom made of ice, and she doesn’t want to be told off ( Read more... )

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juliet316 April 23 2010, 01:02:47 UTC

*sniffles and cries at the ending.

mellaithwen April 24 2010, 12:04:19 UTC

*hands you lots of kleenex*

sorry about that! thanks for reading though :):)

professor_spork April 23 2010, 04:22:09 UTC

Ohhhhhhh. *snuggles them* This was just too great.

Though of course, it's making me miss the snow, when it's almost May and I'm supposed to be looking forward to summer xD

mellaithwen April 24 2010, 12:05:43 UTC

aww thank you!!

hee it was weird to write about snow when it's sunny outside; thankfully my bedroom is freezing at night!! you never know there might be a sudden snowstorm ;) thanks for reading, appreciate it muchly!!

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mellaithwen April 24 2010, 12:14:22 UTC

THANK YOU!! :D I had Bon Iver on iTunes and there's just so many snow/cold/christmas references in their songs!!

and when I put army of ghosts on I really wanted to put the 'forever' bit in and just think about all of the things the Doctor did but would have originally done with Rose.

I'M SORRY ABOUT HEART SLAMMING!! I AM INCAPABLE OF WRITING FLUFF I THINK OR HAPPINESS WITHOUT EVIL ANGST CREEPING IN!!!!

:D thank you so much for reading!! I was terrified to post for the first time!

rowofstars April 24 2010, 01:57:43 UTC

OH. MY. HEART.

It is broken in many tiny pieces but IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE. Really. The little bits of poetry are perfect, the moments you created are perfect. Everything. I really like the thoughts from the duplicate Doctor, wondering if he's good enough and second guessing himself, but always in the end Rose is there and there's just so much love.
And then the end. OH GOD THE END. It's like I saw it coming and yet it still hit me like a ton of bricks. *wibble* This is so beautiful.

mellaithwen April 24 2010, 12:17:44 UTC

Oh I'm glad it's in the best way! I'm so glad you liked it!! :D thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!! :D

sweet_iolanthe April 24 2010, 16:32:17 UTC

omg. i think this was brilliant. and the last part almost brought me to tears. well, it did, i have to admit.

very beautiful.

mellaithwen April 24 2010, 16:51:16 UTC

aww thank you so much, it's very nice of you to say so!! :)