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[mellaithwen]

5 Times the Doctor and Rose got caught out in a snowstorm....(and one time they didn't.), Ten/Rose, Ten II/Rose, R.

“It’s like the stars are falling.” She whispers, because somehow in the silence of the snowflakes, speaking loudly seems wrong. Like they’re in a giant library at the heart of a kingdom made of ice, and she doesn’t want to be told off

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[jellybean728]

Oh just kill me now. I almost didn't want to read the last section, because I knew it would kill me, but I'm a masochist, so I did, and it killed me like always. *sniffles for Ten*

This is fabulous. Thank you.

[mellaithwen]

hee, sorry about that!! but thanks for reading :) I'm glad you liked it!!

[knm1234]

What a lovely, lovely fic. I really liked how you used the prompts ("Hold on," I was thinking. "They're not the Doctor's trousers". But you explained it). And sad too.

Just one little pick (sorry) - there are a few tense issues (it goes between present tense and past tense a couple of times) and typos. It pulled me out of the story on occasion. Hope you don't mind me pointing it out, because this was really good.

[mellaithwen]

aww thank you!! and I've just gone through it again and corrected everything I could see (I kept editting until the last minute, especially tense wise, and I left a lot out; whoops!)

[sunnytyler001]

Beautiful!

[mellaithwen]

:D :D :D

[mellaithwen]

hee thank you!! and I had to include Bon Iver!! One of my favourite artists and there's so many references to cold and snow and winter in the songs :):):) thanks for reading!!

[mellaithwen]

aww thank you, and sorry about the ending, it seemed kinda apt!