[Fic] Heroes - Understanding

Nov 22, 2009 13:25

Title: Understanding
Author: themaskedmckay
Rating: Gen
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: None
Words: 327
Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me.
Summary: Peter knows how to soothe Nathan's fears.
Spoilers: Up to current episode in Season 4.
Author's Notes: Quick fic inspired by Drabble Challenge #19 over at heroes_contest - Came in 1st place.

Thank you to del_rion for the lovely banner!

Read more... )

fic, character: nathan petrelli, character: sylar, character: peter petrelli, rating: gen, fandom: heroes

Leave a comment

Comments 9

amles80 November 23 2009, 15:04:30 UTC
Oh, but this is wonderful!! I mean, of course: "I collect the little things about a person, the private things they don't know I see, and keep them in my heart." -- Yes, Peter is perfect for this promt. And to have so much empathy, to the point of giving it away... oh.

Reply

themaskedmckay November 23 2009, 17:16:20 UTC
Thank you very much!
And to have so much empathy, to the point of giving it away... oh
<3<3<3
He always gives and rarely takes. Gotta admire that about him!

Reply


sparkswill_fly November 23 2009, 19:25:46 UTC
I thought of Peter for this prompt too..but a little differently. This is cool. I love how you caputured Peter and Nathan's entire relationsyhip in a few short paragraphs. That's a testament to your writing skill!! Awesome!!

Reply

themaskedmckay November 23 2009, 19:52:36 UTC
I don't normally write Peter but he seemed like a great match for the prompt. I will have to read your take on it, too!

That's a testament to your writing skill!!
*embarrassed* Thank you! There's definitely more I'd like to write about Peter and his empathy but time is not on my side. XD

Reply


wuhdemah November 23 2009, 20:26:15 UTC
Guhhh, I've always loved Peter, and this made me love him just a little bit more. Perfect characterization. <3 This line right here:

I try to hate, I really do, but it's exhausting to maintain and eventually it comes around to accepting what they've done. I can't not care.

reminds me so much of that scene with Angela and Peter in the chapel in Volume Four, and Angela tells him, "You have every right to hate me," and Peter reassures her that he doesn't. He should, she's been manipulating him since S1, but he doesn't.

This story really captured that aspect of him, I think. <3 I really, truly loved it. And the ending scene between him and Nathan and him taking his hand without a second thought... very poignant. Just guh.

Reply

themaskedmckay November 23 2009, 21:46:42 UTC
Perfect characterization. <3
Thank you! I had a quiet think before I started writing to try to get a feel for Peter. I'm happy to hear my portrayal is believable. ^_^

that scene with Angela and Peter in the chapel
Yus! He's the white sheep in the Petrelli family; all forgiveness and love. I could see how he'd annoy the hell out of Arthur.

This story really captured that aspect of him, I think. <3 I really, truly loved it. Thank you very much! This comment made my day ( ... )

Reply


del_rion November 30 2009, 14:47:01 UTC
I liked this like... wow.

Such a pity it was so short.

It sounds like a quick overview to how the Petrelli brothers are doing, with the emotion being there yet kind of refusing come to surface - and then suddenly it's dark and full of "angst" only Peter can offer to us! (desire to help, so pure and clear yet twisted and dark because he knows a lot of blood and pain will be involved)

Lol, I'm sure my comment made no sense whatsoever.

Reply

themaskedmckay November 30 2009, 17:01:25 UTC
Thank you!
Unfortunately I was working with a 500 word limit. There is a longer Petrelli story in me but it has to wait until I have time to address it. (And it will involve Gabriel as a Petrelli because that's a concept I think they should have stuck with! Epic family dramaz!)

desire to help, so pure and clear yet twisted and dark because he knows a lot of blood and pain will be involved
I SO love the idea of Peter doing good things but who he is, the lengths he's willing to go through, the damage he's willing to do, is still pure Petrelli. They're not a family of sheep, they're a family of sharks, and even a white shark can still do a lot of damage. =D

Reply


jackvelvet August 26 2010, 19:02:08 UTC
Hello!

This fic was nominated at the Summer 2010 Fanfiction Awards, hosted by heroes_faves. Voting is now in progress; it ends tentatively on Sept. 6, at 23:59 EST. Congratulations, and good luck!

-Jack
Mod @ heroes_faves

P.S. Sorry for the impersonal, template-style message. If you received this message more than once, then this fic was probably nominated in more than one category and I accidentally notified you twice. Sorry! Again, good luck!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up