Title: Angels [2/4]

[thelions_den]

Title: Angels [2/4]
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: PG-13
POV: Third, Archie-centric.
Summary: He made himself get out of the car slowly, instead of throwing the door open and running to where he could see Cook was standing. It was weird, too, the way he knew it was Cook, even if he couldn't make out any details. The way he was

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[thelions_den]

KDHSAKLDHSA
DKLHSADLSAH?!?!

DID YOU LIKE IT OMG I WAS SO NERVOUS BECAUSE I WAS TRYING TO GET IT DONE ALRIGHT WAS IT ALRIGHT?!?!?!

I'M SO ANXIOUS AND I LOVE YOU OMGOSH I'M SO HAPPY

[thelions_den]

*FLAILLLLLL* YOU ARE THE BEST. Lol I love the image of Cook reeling Archie in and calling him 'Tiger'. He's called Archie feisty and it just seems to fit, in certain situations. XD

ARCHIE REALLY LIKES KISSING COOK, OKAY? I KNOW I WOULD. @__@

LOL I AM SO DORKY. I LOVE HOW ARCHIE SINGS 'ANGELS' AND, WELL, I"M A DORK. SO. I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT THOUGH~

THE WATER FIGHT THAT I DID NOT PLAN. I WAS GOING TO MAKE IT SEXY AND STUFF BUT THE BOYS WANTED TO BE SILLY, SO WHO AM I DENY THEM?

BAHAHAH JASON SNUCK IN THERE, ALSO SNEAKILY AND TOTALLY NOT PLANNED. I just like the idea of his dreads poking out of a cowboy hat LOL.

I CAN'T BELIEVE I MADE THEM HAVE SEX IN THE HAY. I was seriously going to be mean and like, make Archie go ~cool off before he had to go see his family, and have Cook be all noble or whatever, but Archie WANTED TO GET LAID, OKAY?

LOL GOD THIS STORY DID NOT GO AS I PLANNED. BUT I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY YOU LIKED IT OMGGG!!

[asweetdownfall]

!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING. SERIOUSLY. HOW.

THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY EXCEPT I'M LOOKING FORWARD MUCHLY TO THE NEXT TWO PARTS.

(Also the sexytimes was HOT and your David voice is magnificent, as always. I adore this part especially:

Because he really, really wanted to kiss Cook again. Had he already mentioned that? Well, um, he really did. AND CLAUDIA FLIRTING WITH JASON. HOW MUCH DO I LOVE THAT.)

[carolion]

8D! I'm so glad you liked this part! Originally I had told you there was going to be a sequel, and with smut, but by then I'd written over one thousand words of fluff, and well. This happened. XD

Gahhhhhhh how much do I love it when you tell me my Archie voice is on? *_____* SOMUCH. <333333

LOL I LOVE JASON. I NEEDED HIM IN JEANS AND A COWBOY HAT TOO. ;D

[carolion]

Aw, wow! I'm really flattered I could do so much damage with such a short scene! XD

I guess you'll find out tonight! ;D

[churchslackzluv]

OMGOSH DNDIANDIAIISDAOII THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE VERSES EVER. (FYI, A VERSE IS WHERE A SPECIFIC STORY IS SET IN)

AND IT WAS ADORABLE AND HOT, UNFFFF, LIKE THEM IN THE HAY AND THE BEGGING AND THE. JUST. UNNFFFFF.

I was totally CRACKING UP at this part:

(because, wow! He'd totally gotten jerked off by this, like, completely gorgeous older guy, in the hay, and after he'd come, he'd sort of, like, pressed his hand against Cook's crotch, and um, rubbed a little? And Cook had just moaned and thrust up and came, too! It was awesome)

it's just...his description LOLLLLL SO GOOD.

[carolion]

HOLD ON, I'M GONNA GO RUN AROUND A LITTLE IN JOY

\o/\o/\o/\o/!!!!

Wow! That's - such a HUGE compliment, oh my gosh! I had no idea people would a) like my writing/interpretation/anything, b) like the plot so much! So this is like, dkahfds every birthday and Christmas ever!

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I'm so happy you liked it all! And I'm glad you laughed! <333