Title: Angels [2/4]

[thelions_den]

Title: Angels [2/4]
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: PG-13
POV: Third, Archie-centric.
Summary: He made himself get out of the car slowly, instead of throwing the door open and running to where he could see Cook was standing. It was weird, too, the way he knew it was Cook, even if he couldn't make out any details. The way he was

Comments

[abovetheruins]

OMG, NOT ONLY DO WE GET A SEQUEL, WE GET TWO MORE PARTS TO THIS SERIES? *explodes*

Was so excited to see you'd posted this next part so soon! And once again, you have me completely floored with this.

and his face was all worried so David pushed him back onto the hay and crawled on top of him, curling one hand against Cook's face as he kissed his cheeks, his forehead, his nose, and finally, his lips, shyly. GAH, THIS IMAAAAAGE <333

[carolion]

I have no idea how it spiraled from "oh, a one-shot for aohatsu" to "THIS IS FOUR PART SERIES WITH A PLOT AND EMOTIONAL INVESTMENT"
honestly. this came completely from left field. XD

Aw! I'm so glad you picked up on that line, that was one of my favorite things to imagine, Archie comforting Cook a little, in his own way. <33333 Thanks so much for reading and enjoying and commenting!

[soco63]

I absolutely adore your Archie voice! This:

"He was still weak kneed and breathless from entire experience (because, wow! He'd totally gotten jerked off by this, like, completely gorgeous older guy, in the hay, and after he'd come, he'd sort of, like, pressed his hand against Cook's crotch, and um, rubbed a little? And Cook had just moaned and thrust up and came, too! It was awesome) but he hoped he'd stopped blushing by now, and that the fact that he'd just had sex wouldn't be completely obvious to his family."

I'm really enjoying this fic.. can't wait for the next two parts! :)

[carolion]

Wow, thank you! I've never actually written a 'series' before, so I'm completely ecstatic that it's not, like, all over the place and it makes sense and all that, haha!

Thank you again. <33333

[james_padfoot]

HAPPY. I AM IT.

ALSO SO HOT. AND CUTE. AND LOLZY.

[carolion]

:D YAY! I'm so glad you like it! I like to mix my fluff with my smut with my humor? ;P

[nemesina77]

OMG, you posted it SO fast! YAY!

So the sex was in the background, BUT STILL, Cook is still so sexy, GUH!

I can't wait for the rest of that (two more parts? AWESOME!) though I hope it's soon since I think the wait might kill me!

[carolion]

I decided I was going to try and get a chapter out every night. So hopefully part three will be up tonight. *crosses fingers*

Haha, yes, the sex. There will probably be some in part three? And if not in part three then definitely in part four. Because it wouldn't be like me to exclude smut. XD

Well, I hope you like them! Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and comment. It means a lot!

[penrith1]

Really enjoying this. I loved that roll in the hay. I especially loved the way you kept us guessing a little about what happened and then spill the beans (so to speak).heh
This is sweet and hot and just how first times should be - a little scary but oh soooo good.

[carolion]

Oh! It means so much that you liked it, thank you! I'm glad you liked that, because I was verging on leaving it ambiguous but at the last second I changed my mind.

Oh, good! I'm glad that came across. It's tough writing Archie in sex scenes sometimes, especially since in this AU he barely knows Cook, but is clearly dealing with a lot of sudden emotion and drive and desire.