Title: Bright Future (Can't Fight Fate)

Jan 11, 2011 00:38

Title: Bright Future (Can't Fight Fate)
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: Hard R
POV: Third, Archie-centric
Summary: This isn't his scene, and he knows that.
Disclaimer: This is only for fun. I do not know either David Cook or David Archuleta and this is a piece of fiction solely from my imagination and not based on any true ( Read more... )

character : david cook, rating : r, series : pre-idol au, pairing : david cook/david archuleta, fandom : american idol, genre : smut, !fanfiction, word count : 3000+, character : david archuleta

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mmonroebpd January 11 2011, 13:44:22 UTC
I agree with lady M up there! They're DOOMED! HAHA!

hot...as usual...good job woman!!

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carolion January 11 2011, 22:47:00 UTC
How did I miss responding to your comment?! I am silly.

Haha, thank you! And yes, if I had my wicked way they would never leave the bedroom... ;)

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mmonroebpd January 11 2011, 23:44:33 UTC
lol! me too...me too...

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carolion January 11 2011, 19:16:48 UTC
YOU ARE PSYCHIC

YOU SENSE MY FIC BEFORE I WRITE IT~

(I posted the first half in a DP a long time ago, as I wrote it.)

Tell your coworkers/people around you I apologize for making you not-shower. And yet a certain sense of pride fills me...

:D Idk Brandi, I'm getting amped to write David-As-A-Porn-Star or as I have now titled it 'Fuck Me Harder'
OR HAVE YOU NOTICED I USUALLY MAKE DAVID A SQUIRMING LITTLE SLUT?

Right? He's terrible. Leaving Cook hanging like that. MAYBE, MAYBE NOT. WHEN DO YOU GET BACK BRANDI? ;D

Ooh, I shall listen.

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carolion January 11 2011, 22:46:21 UTC
Idk how you get me to do this but I've already written 500+ words for the sequel, lol. PLEASING YOU IS APPARENTLY VERY HIGH IN MY PRIORITIES.

I am doing an outline because it's going to be a fairly hefty project, we're not leaping straight to fisting. Though hopefully it won't be more than one part. Hopefully.

GOOD.

ALSO VERY VERY GOOD I DON'T GET HUGGED INAPPROPRIATELY ENOUGH.
Brandi I'm afraid I won't want you to leave though. ;___;

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penrith1 January 11 2011, 14:14:10 UTC
Good one. Oh Archie. Laughing. Imagine thinking that his visceral reaction to Cook meant he wasn't his type.

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carolion January 11 2011, 19:19:24 UTC
Haha thank you!

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rajkumari905 January 11 2011, 14:38:54 UTC
ASDKJFOEIJSD UM I REALLY LOVE THIS A LOT.

SDLKFJAOIEJDSLAFIFED.

SKLDFJAOID A LOT.

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rajkumari905 January 11 2011, 14:42:07 UTC
Oh god, I REALLY LOVED THIS.

okay, David in this. sldkafjoweijf he is my favorite, omg. TAKING CLAUDIA TO SEE MWK. THE WAY THE FAMILY JUST LOVES MUSIC, ALL OF THEM. BEING RIDICULOUSLY ATTRACTED TO COOK, LIKE, INSTANTLY.

oh my god, Cook. Cook. COOK. WAS. SO. HOT. IN. THIS. I. DO. NOT. EVEN. KNOW. WHAT. TO. DO.

just all. confident and sexy and lsdkfjaweifjdsfalekf fuck.

AND OKAY, I HAVE SUCH A THING FOR UP AGAINST THE WALL OUTSIDE OF THE CLUB WHERE THEY JUST MET AND COOK IS JUST TOO SEXY FOR ARCHIE TO RESIST. AND FUCK.

that whole secion was soooooooo freaking hot, idek.

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rajkumari905 January 11 2011, 14:42:17 UTC
AND I LOVED THIS.

He’s going to find a nice guy who isn’t going to touch him below the belt until David guides his hands there (unlike Cook’s, whose hands had been everywhere, cupping his ass and curving around his thighs), who doesn’t have tattoos or silly facial hair, who probably won’t be able to get him to scrabble at his pants like he’s desperate for it, but who will make love nice and slow and gentle.

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rajkumari905 January 11 2011, 14:43:18 UTC
SADLKFJAOWIJDS AND THEM MEETING AGAIN AT HOLLYWOOD WEEK SALFJWIFJD SRSLY. FUCK.

AND.

“You came out here to be kissed,” Cook murmurs

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.

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rhiminee_1 January 11 2011, 16:15:46 UTC
Ummm. What Pri said.

BASICALLY I LOVE THIS. LOOOOOOOVE. Thank you so much for sharing <3333333

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carolion January 11 2011, 19:24:10 UTC
:D :D :D <33333 Thank you!! Yay, omg, heeee!

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