You are my Sun Chapter 6.

Sep 11, 2010 00:50

Title: You are my Sun Chapter 6. Secrets, secrets...
Author:thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG/13
Beta: The lovely ms_belle10 :)
Summary: Matt and Dom are still in school. At first, they are not in good terms but things will evolve. *wink*
Feedback: is what I like the most! (well, after Muse and chocolate, of course! :P)
Warnings: Cursing.
Disclaimers: As ( Read more... )

[length] series, fanfiction, slash, [era] teen muse, [series] you are my sun, [type] angst, muse, [type] suspense, [type] friendship, [type] first time, [pairing] belldom

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pat401 September 10 2010, 22:29:51 UTC
Loved it! Please update soon! :)

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absolutionbitch September 11 2010, 01:09:16 UTC
Why haven't I read the before? Oh that's right, because I'm a freak -.-"

I actually love this story!

Please update soon!

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 08:59:04 UTC
YAY, new reader!!! :D Thank you so much! <3

The next part will be... EPIC! :P

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 08:57:53 UTC
Thank youuuuu!

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ms_belle10 September 11 2010, 03:04:46 UTC
I had absolutely no idea what was going to happen in this update. No idea.

Seriously, though, it was as wonderful the second time around as it was the first, and I'm looking forward to the second part!

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 09:02:38 UTC
Haha, you know a lot of things in advance now! ;)

I'm glad that it was unexpected. Your opinion means so much to me therefore I thank you with all my heart!!! <3

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starlight_myth September 11 2010, 04:54:43 UTC
You left it there?? But...but....
Oh well I guess that part comes in the next chapter. *sigh*

Annette is a #$@&^%*%#.......BITCH!!!
How dare she play with Dom? And Dom, so bloody smitten that he can't see it! Only Matt can save him now!

What was that notebook thing? You didn't tell me about that!

And it was so weird to read the part I had written. I hope doesn't sound too immature!

Loved it! Can't wait for the next!

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 09:06:55 UTC
Myth, you chose a lovely icon! ;)

I had to leave it there... told you, I have to keep my readers interested! ;)

Yeah, Annette is really antipathetic! :-/ She hurts everybody around her.

The notebook :D It will have an ESSENTIAL role! Your part was great, told you, I could have never written it!:P

*hugs*

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farawisa September 11 2010, 06:00:12 UTC
loved it. and you found a way to let matt know that dom knows he's playing the guitar.

great chapter, brigi, hope you update this again soon.

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 09:13:28 UTC
LOL! Your icon is lovely! :D

Yes, yes Dom couldn't keep it any more to him... and a serious talk is expected to follow. ;)

I'll try my best to post it asap... I have so many ideas for fics! @_@

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farawisa September 11 2010, 09:38:33 UTC
kate made it. i like it too.

i too have too many ideas running around in my mind. i am writing sing for absolution atm and have this really big project that will have the stories for plug in baby, knights and resistance for the first part playing in 2007, while sunburn, eternally missed, supermassive black hole and others will be for the second one playing in 2009/10. also i still have the speeddate interview and my story for united states also wants to be written. if you want to know more send me an email or pm anywhere. :P

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 16:26:18 UTC
Oh, nice! :D

Wooooow, Franzi, you probably have even more ideas than me! :P I'll stop complaining! :P

Sure, I own you my reply anyway... *blushes* Sorry, I'm really slow at answering them.

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ashamedbliss September 11 2010, 09:36:16 UTC
EEEEEEEEEE! I might do some quoting :D

First of all - I love this! The story is just getting better and better as it goes along, and I love all the small details that are so significant! Okay, some quotes to express my love :D

but Dom couldn’t figure out yet what Matt’s problem was. stupid retard, where the fuck have you been over the last few weeks? DUH HE LOVES YOU. *calms* Silly Dommie, Matt might have a lickle crush on you :P

No one was allowed to see his pain. Okay, make that a normal crush...

In fact, the reason why he couldn’t sleep was Dom. All night he had been turning about in his bed with Dom, Dom, Dom and Dom as the only thing his mind pondered. His radiant smile, his aquamarine eyes, his cute laughter, his tanned skin, his fresh scent, his joyful being and many more things flashed Matt’s mind. How could he have slept when Dom’s ghost was hovering about in his room; when he could imagine the cold moonbeam dancing gracefully on Dom’s shiny locks of hair; when he could feel his desk-mate’s scent lingering in the air? LOL ( ... )

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thekeyholder September 11 2010, 16:42:11 UTC
I'm really sorry for my late reply but internet is slower on my laptop than on my computer. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your wonderful comment!

Oh, wait till the next chapter... >:) Hehe, can't wait to write it! LOL, I love how you started from little crush and finished as a deep crush! And I'm actually very thankful for your quotes; this way I know which parts you liked! ;)

Annette is such a biatch! :-/ Seriously, how can Brigi put her in Yams?! xD Bur RL is full of Annettes running up and down in our life so yeah...

Aaa... I think I confused people a bit. Dunno if you read that post from me, I think it's called "Some clarifications about YAMS". Actually, Matt is not gay at the beginning... I have this theory that he's gay just for Dom. xD And vice versa.

*kisses favourite sentence award* LOL! Really, you should win the "Best comment writer" award! You always make authors smile! :D:D

So yes, I love this so much. Took away my bit of 'I'm not in London' blues :D:') I'm glad that I could help you! Really, you are such ( ... )

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ashamedbliss September 11 2010, 18:13:32 UTC
No worries! Aww, thank you for your wonderful chapter ( ... )

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