You are my Sun Chapter 8.
Title: You are my Sun Chapter 8. Strange revelations
Author:thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG 13
Beta: The lovely miss_ariake :)
Summary: Matt and Dom are still in school. At first, they are not in good terms but things will evolve. *wink*
Feedback: is what I like the most! (well, after Muse and chocolate, course! :P)
Warnings: Cursing, a bit of violence.
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Author:thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG 13
Beta: The lovely miss_ariake :)
Summary: Matt and Dom are still in school. At first, they are not in good terms but things will evolve. *wink*
Feedback: is what I like the most! (well, after Muse and chocolate, course! :P)
Warnings: Cursing, a bit of violence.
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Pretty emotional stuff for Dom, so no wonder he's confused about his attraction to Matt. At least it looks like things might be going in the right direction for them? Please???
Really great chapter!!
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Oh yes, Dominic was very confused, and even though he tried to stand off, he realised that Matt is a real friend who's always there for him. <3 :)
At least it looks like things might be going in the right direction for them? Please???
AWWW! :') That's a secret! :P But yes, they are definitely on the right path!
*hugs* Thank you so much for your nice comment!
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Gorgeous as always my beautiful wifey *hugs so tight* best chapter yet :3
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That's how I am after reading all these nice comments! I didn't realise that this chapter would get such positive feedback. :')
Matt is a great friend, he will comfort Dommy.
best chapter yet :3
:O :O *blushes* Oh wow... thank you, my lovely wifey! <3 *hugs*
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*hugs, but taps foot waiting for that message* it contained a rather important question of sorts :P
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!<3
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Love your icon!;)
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I resisted three months without saying a word; I’ll just stash my sentiments in the most secure place, in my heart, and nobody will ever find out about them.
I felt so bad for Matt there. He's probably breaking inwardly and Dom seems to have no idea. Well, Dom's not completely clueless.
He prohibited his mind from wandering to the unexpected event of the party, especially to the pleasant warmness that made his body tingle whenever he remembered it. His ears burnt just at the thought that he had enjoyed the kiss.
I loved those lines! So wonderfully written! It explains a lot about the situation.
And I definitely didn't see the fight between Dom's parents coming. That was really, really horrible. Poor Dom. He didn't need more confusion and misery in his life. But I didn't see the break up coming, which was AWESOMEEE! I was like, 'finally!'
The last bit...was so gorgeous! The boys have grown so much closer to each other with just a simple action.
Dominic ( ... )
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It pleases me greatly that you notice and understand some details in my stories, all those tiny, but relevant details. Thank you! <3
Heh! :P I'm glad that I surprised you. But I didn't see the break up coming, which was AWESOMEEE! I was like, 'finally!' *highfives* Yes, it was about time, right? :P
AWWWWWWWW, thank you! I'm glad that you liked the last part, it makes me want to cuddle up to them. :') Love you, my dear! *hugs*
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Of course, I see the details. Those are what make your writing special!
Oh yeah the break up! *highfives* It came perfectly, actually and Dom going off to Matt was the best thing that could follow it ;)
it makes me want to cuddle up to them.
Same here!
Love you too! *hugs*
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