[APH] Falling Without Knowing (end)

[thejmprod]

Title: Falling Without Knowing
Category: Axis Powers Hetalia / Hetalia World Series
Characters/Pairings: Greece/Japan, others mentioned
Genre/Rating/Warnings: romance, drama, sci-fi/PG/post apocalyptic space opera, switching between country and human names

Summary/Excerpt: The nations are living in their own planets, united under one galaxy. By

Comments

[chromatic_coma]

You already know how amazing and wunderbar I think this chapter is but I feel the need to shower more praise on it because wow, you managed to turn such a tear jerker (which was very beautiful) into this (which is even more beautiful). I loved seeing all the other nations' take on the incident that happened to Kiku and Herakles; I thought that New Turkey and New China's lines in that passage were especially poignant.

And you know how much I love me some Greece/Egypt, so that scene with New Egypt's visit just made me melt into happy fangirl goo ♥♥♥ Toooooooooo cute!

And then that ending. Brilliant, love, just brilliant ♥

I really love the photo you chose to open this chapter, for some reason. I mean, I like them all but this one really stood out as just awesome.

[disownmereturns]

And I can't thank you enough! >///< ♥ Also their scene was for you :'3

Thank you so much for all the support with this story, really. Couldn't have gotten it out here without your awesome beta! :')

I was in awe when I found it. I was like dfjkghdfkjgh this is perfeeeect :'D

[chromatic_coma]

F-for me?! >//////////////////////< somehow i suspected it but I didn't want to assume I-I-I am sooooooooooooooooo honored >//////////////////< *blush* *more blush* *explodes*

*more incoherent squeeing*

Gah, you're welcome of course ♥ I had a lot of fun betaing for you, tooooooo! So count on me if you ever need anothet beta, m'kay? :'33

it is soooo perfect

[charlzway]

You made me cry again, but this time, it was in a good way :'D

I... I don't think I can even find the words to do justice with how I feel about this whole story (if such words exist to properly describe them). But I really, really love everything about this fic. Everything. I loved how you included the other New!Nations into this, and how the Council finally saw their wrong (they aren't too evil after all! yay!).

"Only nations are meant to live this long" - This line speaks volumes to me of the humanity of nations, even in their seemingly immortal lifespan. I dunno if that was what you were thinking of while writing that paragraph, but it just make me feel so.

And:
"The man looked up and their eyes met.

(The gonging ceased and there was silence.)

A pearl colored butterfly passed between them."

I effin' love how you ended with this!! These three lines were my favourite part of the entire fic and you ended it with it!! As what Chromatic_Coma said previously: Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.

So, thank you, once again, for

[disownmereturns]

Thank you so much! Your comment makes me really happy :'3

And yeah, sorta along those lines X'DD I mean, it's something like they can make themselves live as long as nations but they how they live/perceive things can't be maximized given the amount of time they now have because they aren't nations in the first place

lolwhut I rambled X'DD

And thank you again for reading and commenting! :) Awwwww I rarely receive v-gifts so yaayyyyy! ♥

[charlzway]

Rambling is good sometimes xD

And, no problem <3

[daemoninwhite]

I have never, ever been so unrepentally happy to have been trolled (does this even count as trolling? It's too sweet). The little hints that you get here and there about how the removal of that 'one' memory effected them so much. What makes it unexpectedly sad is the fact that Greece apparently can't recognise it

[disownmereturns]

I really love how you've got your own music for this :D That song is truly lovely :)

Also LOL thank you! :D *used the English to hide the fact I dunno Japanese for shit* D'you take Japanese? Because that be so cool 8'D

Fanartfanartgoooooo~ loljk

Thank you so much! >///< Maybe side stories~

[daemoninwhite]

I have far more than just my own music. I have a fucking ritual. I light this certain incense that my little sister bought me, put that song on repeat, and get a cup of sweet, dark tea. THIS FIC IS THAT GOOD.

Actually, yeah, I'm in my second year at uni studying Japanese. It's really not that cool, way too many kanji.

I'VEALREADYDRAWNTOOMUCHFANARTFORTHISSERIESDURINGMYLESSONS /sobs

Fuck yeah side stories. You know you want to write one about the secretly romantic!nations sighing over Japan and Greece, and the reactions of EVERYONE on the planets to Japan and Greece and awkward moments when Greece's exchange students walk in on strange moments and Pochi and Corporal Cat and Turkey and Spain and Romano and ANGST and really sweet moments and Greece taking Japan to see sunset and stuff and stuff and asdfgjkl, this universe has so much potential!

[disownmereturns]

Oh my gawd X'D I just grabbed my pillow and screamed into it. Thank you so much! >////< Seriously ♥

Aww but still~ :D

EEEEE~ I kinda want to see now dkjghkfjgh but no pressure :'3

Wat X'D Someday~ When this fic is all old and I'm like 'Hey why don't I write a side story?' /shot

OH YOU

[couryielle]

vhvHMVHNGCnhgcnhgCNHGc ghNC <3

qRTWRtfHVc vcMnkPOuoiutYWa ZFCHgkhLKH JchmV aaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

forgive this derp, she had been looking forward to this since forever

I can't, I don't know, I really can't make anything comprehensible right now. Just. JUST. This is like, the best birthday fic I've ever read. OH THE POSSIBILITIES

Excuse me while I fanspaz/spam my Tumblr with Giripan/try (and fail) to write spin-off/start building that altar like I said I would

PS: Nobody in the right mind would ever be the same after listening to Greece's Hatafutte. Which I did. While reading this. Mmmm.

Re: OH YOU

[disownmereturns]

Derp gratefully accepted bby :'D

ALSO OI bukas pa birthday mo diba? X'DD Baka ipost ko fic req mo. Ayun! Bday fic LAWL :'3 But thank youuuuuu so much gurl! ♥ Kahit pinilit kitang basahin yung fic na toh jejeje :D /shot

Gooooo spin offff weeeee~ \O\\O//O/

Re: PS
huh what bakit
nahawa na ba sa pagka bangag niya? 8'D

Re: OH YOU

[couryielle]

It's past midnight na, so \o/ :DDDDD

Uwaaaaaah /passes out GHGHSGKSDGSKGHF THAT would be THE best birthday present aaaaaaaaaaaaah ♥♥♥ pero no need to post it on Saturday kung busy po kayo :3

eh, I was gonna read it anyway, just kept putting it off /takes your shot

hurhurr asa naman, wishful thinking/forever WIP siguro xD

Re: Re: PS
parang tumutula lang eh xD
or, like anonymous said: it sounds like he's walked out of a BL drama CD x'DDDDD
asteeg kaya, considering na pareho sila ng VA ni Prussia :3

Re: OH YOU

[disownmereturns]

HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ♥
☆ ヘ(^_^ヘ)(ノ^_^)ノ ☆

N'aw I've got time tonight. Susulat ko na siya :'3 Or mebbe tomorrow X'D /derps on Tumblr

HAHA forever WIP okay lang din :'D

Rerereloon relon sintaaa /shot
Dear lord, I wish he did :D
Baguhan pa naman si Atsushi Kousaka eh (gwapo pa so I'm not complaining weeee~)
Baka in the course of his career, magBL yun~

[seena58]

Well, I've said this before, but I'll say it again anyway; this story was a wonderful read. The emotions, the atmosphere, everything (from start to end) was just amazing ♥ This was one hell of an awesome ride.

[disownmereturns]

Thank you! :'3 And thanks for the challenge with the ending dear :'D Couldn't have thought of it otherwise! O/