(FIC) A Good Death for Kish by Reddwarfer

[highonwasabi]

For: kish_t_rethya
By: reddwarfer
Title: A Good Death
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: R
Summary: Fuji wants Tezuka to retire. Echizen doesn't know what he wants and Tezuka just wants things to go right.
Warnings: Assassin AU. Lame attempts at humour.
Disclaimer: I neither own nor profit from the Prince of Tennis. I hope Patrick Henry can forgive me one day.
A/N: I want to

Comments

[misterwalnut]

The plot was very well-executed, and I love Fuji's artistic method of assasinating. Excellent fic!

-Adds to memories-

[reddwarfer]

Thanks so much.

[kishmet]

This is amazing and brilliant in so many ways. ASSASSIN AU. You have no idea how much I love the idea, and you pulled it off so well! lajdsfls this is sexy, sweet, and absolutely gorgeous.

Firstly, your humor is AWESOME, not lame at all.
"I can see it, then...if Pillars suddenly sprouted hand-painted scowls and started shooting at anything that moved." Fantastic! Your Fuji is wonderful.

"There're always choices. Like your choice to wear that hideous lavender shirt every single time we get free time and I manage to get you to take me on a date," That made me laugh so much. It's so in-character for both of them.

"So your idea of retirement is to scare people shitless," Tezuka asked, amused as they walked, realising belatedly that Fuji had guided him toward another love hotel.

"Isn't that everyone's?" Fuji replied blithely, a bounce in his step. I'm cracking up again reading that part. XD

[reddwarfer]

I'm such an ass for not responding sooner. I want to say I'm SO SO SO SO relieved. I wanted so much to not fail at it. I had fun writing this, though and I tried to make the dynamics the same...or close.

As for Echizen. I've always found him tricky to write. I wanted to mirror the whole Power triangle dynamic found in the series. With the pillaring between Tezuka and Ryoma and the competitiveness between Fuji and Ryoma. So, I'm glad it worked for you.

*dances* Thanks for liking it. This review made my day.

[ellipsesbandit]

This is brilliantly entertaining. I am so happy to see someone else thinks the tenipuri boys would make awesome assassins. And I've waited so long to see Fuji pull a gun on the chibi.

Though I must admit my favorite part is the reference to that god-awful lavender shirt :)

[reddwarfer]

Thanks so much. :D assassins, but of course. Or it could be purely cause I'd think Tezuka'd look hot holding a gun and Fuji having knives...

[ellipsesbandit]

Looking hot holding guns and knives is 90% of the reason they'd make great assassins :)

[inner_demons_]

;kvrhgj;eqrith;2qeuib YES! Assassin AU for the win :D

Love it all. <33333333

[reddwarfer]

Thanks hon~

[arsenicgraffiti]

This is brilliant and well-thought out, one of the very few Tezuka/Fuji fics that I've enjoyed (the pair does nothing for me usually). I'm definately adding this to my memories. ^_^

[reddwarfer]

Thank you so much. I'm even more happy knowing that zukafuji isn't your cuppa. They're one of those pairs you love or hate. :D