those eyes part IV

[draculadeeda]

Ok, finally! The next part has arrived. This whole part was only supposed to be three paragraphs, but it turned into about three pages instead. But you get to see a slightly naughty/evil side of daniel. *sighs* He's such a tease. Oh, and before someone is forced to ask, Delectatio, the name of the shop, is latin for treats.

Title: Those Eyes part IV

Comments

[aleathiel]

Nice nice nice! I liked the other parts, as you know, but here it feels like we're really getting into the story. I like Daniel, he's not about to be second to Elijah.

[ashturil]

Daniel can do that?!! *swoons* Tis scary... he can heat up the room even without Lij's help! No, in fact thanks to Lij...

I can't wait till we get to the really juicy parts. Write more!

[hobbitlove83]

Omg, that is soo sensual!!
The image of Dan and his ice cream... and "Is there something you wanted?"
You're building it up very nicely- can't wait to see more of Daniel's seduction techniques!