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thegreymoon

FIC: Ultimate Hate 16/??

Mar 14, 2010 11:58

Title: Ultimate Hate: Consequences VI

Fandom: Tekken

Pairing : Kazuya/Lee

Disclaimer: I do not own Tekken or any of its characters. I am not making any profit from this.

Rating: R

Warnings: Incest, violence, language, angst.

Previous chapter: http://thegreymoon.livejournal.com/22845.html

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fanfiction, kazuya x lee, tekken

Comments 16

angel0399 March 14 2010, 18:27:56 UTC

Very interesting!!

thegreymoon March 14 2010, 18:31:03 UTC

Thank you! ^__^

golden_bastet March 15 2010, 03:42:21 UTC

Man, I *cannot* wait to see what happens when he does catch up to Lee...

thegreymoon March 15 2010, 07:01:20 UTC

He, he! Thank you! ^^ I can't wait for him to catch up to Lee either! *is a perv*

seiferstrike19 March 15 2010, 13:15:09 UTC

Man I adore these double posts! lol ( ... )

thegreymoon March 15 2010, 21:15:59 UTC

LOL, thank you! I am happy that you are enjoying the double posts! XDDD ( ... )

seiferstrike19 March 16 2010, 06:40:39 UTC

Wow, after reading your further breakdown of why Kazuya wants Lee I almost smacked myself in the head lol. It all boils down to love! Such a simple concept and yet I completely missed it! (I'm a dork lol ( ... )

thegreymoon March 16 2010, 10:52:34 UTC

LOL, I am happy that you missed the love, because I was writing a Kazuya POV and Kazuya would never admit to something like that himself... at least not right now, hehe! I want to make him suffer some more, until he is FORCED to admit it to Lee himself and in no unclear terms too! XDDD ( ... )

ratul March 17 2010, 14:47:36 UTC

OMG!!! What happens when he catches up to lee!! Damn the anticipation!!!

thegreymoon March 17 2010, 15:44:09 UTC

Hehehe, anticipation is good! XDDD

Well, when he catches up to Lee, we get smex!!! Umm... conflict, I mean conflict! *damn*

^___^

vivialovesred January 23 2011, 11:13:58 UTC

There is something perverse going on here, lol. Kazuya is going to lock up Lee in a room with a control pad on the outside.o_o ( ... )

thegreymoon January 23 2011, 12:28:19 UTC

LOL, Kazuya is definitely going to try to lock Lee up in a room with the control pads on the outside, but I can't guarantee that he'll be very successful about it! I am very amused by the idea of Kazuya coming up with all this elaborate security in an effort to keep Lee contained, only to have Lee take it all apart right in front of him and watch him blow a fuse! :P ( ... )

vivialovesred January 23 2011, 17:48:54 UTC

"As a consequence, Kazuya will be forced to change, become more tolerant and learn some normal patterns of behaviour, because if he doesn't, Lee will be destroyed by his side and this is something that he cannot allow, because ultimately, he really loves him more than anything! ^__^"

Yay, Kazuya will finally give in! Kazuya, you impossible man.

It's so strange that the one he loves is also the most threatening person for him. No, not Devil, that would be silly. :D
Kazuya is stoic but acts a lot like a spoiled child from the start. It wasn't his fault he acted the way he did to Lee, no, it was Lee who was the intruder. And then Lee was too young and he had to wait! Ha ha!
You know, this is how Kazuya would behave.

thegreymoon January 23 2011, 22:03:09 UTC

LOL, the only way this can end happily is if Kazuya ultimately defers to Lee in some way, because Lee is the relatively sane one among them! XDDD

You know, I do see Kazuya as a child in some ways. He is without a doubt a crazy sociopath. Because of his bad upbringing, he would have ended up somewhat emotionally stunted and behaviourally challenged. He has a lot of a child's "I WANT!!!" attitude towards a lot of things in life and is pretty heedless of the reckless destruction he causes to get it! I kind of see Lee as his salvation and a way to channel all that negative energy into something less volatile-- or at the very least, something that can co-exist with the rest of the planet! ^__^