FIC: Ultimate Hate 16/??

[thegreymoon]

Title: Ultimate Hate: Consequences VI

Fandom: Tekken

Pairing : Kazuya/Lee

Disclaimer: I do not own Tekken or any of its characters. I am not making any profit from this.

Rating: R

Warnings: Incest, violence, language, angst.

Previous chapter: http://thegreymoon.livejournal.com/22845.html

Comments

[thegreymoon]

LOL, I am happy that you missed the love, because I was writing a Kazuya POV and Kazuya would never admit to something like that himself... at least not right now, hehe! I want to make him suffer some more, until he is FORCED to admit it to Lee himself and in no unclear terms too! XDDD

Well, as far as the part with Senn goes, I will not be rewriting it now, because I need to put some distance between myself and the text before I can look at it objectively and see what I can do to make it better, but it is definitely something that I will keep in mind for later! It probably just needs a little rewording to turn out OK and I will fix it later, when the lines to do that come to me on their own!:) I mean, I could put a little bit of the explanation in the text itself, but that isn't really the point... if the explanation is not evident in the story itself, then I have done something wrong and it needs to be corrected, big deal or not! ^__^

LOL, I always saw Lee as a bit of a tease, whether he intends to be one, or not! He is alluring, even when he isn't trying to be, like a walking, living breathing, 24/7 temptation! And besides, Kazuya is wicked and he deserves to be tortured by Lee a little! But don't worry, he will have his revenge for everything that Lee has put him through, hehehe! *is evil*

Eh, feedback is important to the writer and I love the readers who leave me comments, even if it is only from time to time, because when somebody mentions something, or even just tells me that they like (or don't like) a certain part, then I know whether I am doing things right (or wrong)! I can't know how a reader will percieve my story, unless they tell me, so that I can fix the things that are going wrong and keep writing the stuf that people like! ^__^ But unfortunately, a lot of writers are so sensitive and they get offended when somebody tells something that they do not want to hear, regardless of whether that person is right or not, so most readers have stopped commenting all together, which is sad and counterproductive. :(