fic: baby you should stick around (harry/zayn) // r.

Jan 21, 2013 17:23


baby you should stick around
4165 words. r. harry/zayn.
summary: harry doesn’t know what it’s like having zayn’s burdens to carry around, and therefore he doesn’t understand why zayn can’t deal with the idea of them being out.
warnings: strongly alluded racism, as well as one instance of a homophobic slur.
author’s notes: basically this started as ( Read more... )

ship: harry/zayn, rating: r, fic: one-shot

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hostagesfic January 22 2013, 02:53:13 UTC
Oh, Zee... this is so, so wonderful. It's achey and breaky and a little downright painful at times, but I loved it to pieces. I love the way that your Harry loves your Zayn, and the scene where he comes back after their little spat is so sweet. (And hot!!!! That too!!!!! Definitely one of my favorite first times ever? Definitely.) This is great and I think it might be my favorite thing that you've written so far? So, so wonderful, and sensitive, and just- I mean, I could go on and on with a bunch of adjectives that are really just me trying to sound intelligent instead of flat-out capslocking keysmash, but. <3 xs

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hostagesfic January 22 2013, 02:56:46 UTC
... cosigned? /happy sigh, this was so so wonderful, zee :) -p

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thediamondskies January 22 2013, 03:03:45 UTC
awww :3 thank both of you ladies, this is the perfect first comment.

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kayskull January 22 2013, 06:13:22 UTC
OMG! This was beautiful. Very beautiful. So beautiful I cried in the sex scene.

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thediamondskies January 22 2013, 08:52:31 UTC
oh wow. thank you <3

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sburet84 January 23 2013, 04:28:16 UTC
!!!!!!!!! I love your writing :)

*samantha*

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thediamondskies January 23 2013, 07:39:48 UTC
thank you! <3

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aleissam January 23 2013, 20:54:38 UTC
“you’re beautiful,” harry whispers as he kisses him on the cheek.

“you’re beautiful,” he hums as he kisses his jaw.

“you’re beautiful,” he murmurs as his lips graze his neck.

“you’re beautiful,” he promises as he kisses zayn on the lips.

you’re beautiful. not even gonna lie I'm lucky no one here to see me cry. your writing is amazing

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thediamondskies January 24 2013, 05:14:59 UTC
awww, thank you!

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beethemonster February 6 2013, 22:12:59 UTC
this is so so lovely and perfect, really ♥ very very beautiful, i don't really have any words!

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thediamondskies February 7 2013, 06:20:48 UTC
thank you <3

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