FIC: Everything In Its Right Place (FMA, kinda sorta Hughes/Roy)

[thedeadparrot]

Title: Everything In Its Right Place
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Spoilers: Episode 25
Pairing(s): Hughes/Roy-ish, Hughes/Gracia, Roy/Riza-ish
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Summary: "There are things you don't dwell on, though, while dead, and Roy is one of them."
Notes: For the temps_mort/contrelamontre death challenge.  Written in 89 minutes, which should

Comments

[anchorstine]

*applauds*
Flowed wonderfully and very enjoyably easy to read. Lovely work, even for an unbeta-ed piece.

[thedeadparrot]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Not having a beta makes me nervous and twitchy.

[sophiap]

Oh, so beautiful, and sad in a way that's almost happy. One of the things that's sad is that your Hughes is able to love so damn much, but doesn't seem to comprehend just how much others care for him.

[thedeadparrot]

Oh, thank you. That was pretty much exactly what I was going for, the sadness that is almost happy. :)

[ex_saraswath377]

Your Hughes and your second person are eternally the win.

[thedeadparrot]

Thank you. I was actually thinking that I, uh, stretched Hughes' characterization a bit, so I'm glad that it wasn't too, too much.

[fey_puck]

I'm not normally one for FMA fics....but I loved this. Bittersweet and sad, but beautiful.

[thedeadparrot]

FMA fic is pretty good! I swear! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[funkyzanzara]

Popping in to inform you that this made me grin like an idiot.

That is all. Carry on.

[thedeadparrot]

Yay! Grinning! :D