Fic: Action Figures and Fashion Dolls, Chapter 2

[thedeadlyhook]

Okay, it's a little rough, but it's here! Finally this old story is moving again.

Title: Action Figures and Fashion Dolls
Author: thedeadlyhook
Rating: This chapter, PG-13. Probably NC-17 overall.
Disclaimer: Buffy the Vampire Slayer characters not mine; no infringement intended, and no profit is being made here

Comments

[petzipellepingo]

And then there's animal sacrifices. Oh, and I got an orgy scheduled for tomorrow, so thanks for reminding me. I gotta pick up some candles and finger food."
Hee!

And "wibbles" Dawn being uncomfortable with Spike and Buffy being together. Poor Buffy - and poor Dawn.

[thedeadlyhook]

I love your icon! I really do need a Dawn icon, don't I? I just adore writing conversations between the sisters.

The discomfort will unfortunately continue for awhile. I never felt that Dawn's issues were sufficiently settled in the show, so it's something I want to explore.

[petzipellepingo]

That's the work of waizya.

[thisficklemob]

Uh oh. Buffy, when you wish for dire, plz to be more specific, yes?

And yay! For there being more of this story. :)

[thedeadlyhook]

Hee, she does have bad luck in that area, doesn't she?

Thank you!

[prophecygirrl]

So glad to see this 'verse continue! Great sisterly interaction here -- the character voices are wonderful. And Buffy's anxiety is palpable throughout. Great stuff.

[thedeadlyhook]

Thanks so much! I really love writing the Buffy and Dawn convos. I don't have a sister myself, so maybe I'm just channeling. : )

[rahirah]

I have a feeling that in the long run, Buffy can deal with the objections of friends and family a lot better than she can deal with Spike cutting her out of half his life...

[thedeadlyhook]

I think you're very right. : ) Now, hopefully, I'll be able to explain his reasons for that next...

[elisi]

Ooooh I'm liking this. Buffy not trusting Willow and Dawn not trusting Spike - great conflicts and very well told!

[thedeadlyhook]

Thank you! (And I don't suppose it's too much of a spoiler to say that Willow will be making an appearance herself fairly soon - I'm really looking forward to that part, since I started writing it months ago.)