safe up here with you ✿ for ailiblue

[daelightmods]

Title: safe up here with you
Recipient: ailiblue
Rating: G
Word Count: 2512 words
Summary: Baekhyun on the outside seems to be a really charming kid who is friends with everyone but late every night he confesses his unexplainable loneliness to the moon. Little does he know there is a boy on the moon always listening to him.
Warning/s: second person pov ._

Comments

[ailiblue]

Ascgkllkjdjeidjekenendndnr Spot?!

:D

[ailiblue]

Ah, I'm sorry for taking so long to reply! I've finally been able to read this in its entirety! =D

I'm so glad you took this prompt! When I put it down, I was hesitant because I myself didn't have an idea how it would work. It was just a small fragment so I'm glad you could turn the small idea into something, especially something so beautiful!

The 2nd person POV was very interesting for me, I don't think I've read many before and it really works with the story. ^___^

Baekhyun in the story just made me want to squish him up and tell him all the things Jongdae wanted to tell him. Both of them are lonely in their own ways and asfhflgsdjghfjein TT_TT

But facts are true. I think truth is very comforting.
I like that Jongdae sees the world so simply and so differently because he sees from further away.

I’m the closest thing to you in the galaxy. I really loved this line. Right amount of sad and nice. XD

[bcnf3nf]

wow this is really beautiful......... teach me your ways...

thank you <3

[hanakolexie]

This story was amazing. Like seriously.

At first I was afraid that I wouldn't like the second person POV (I couldn't read a book because of it, no matter how good the book was) but since this story is short, it was totally bearable. And I have to admit it gave something, a plus, to the story. I almost felt as lonely as "the moon" reading it (which I think was kind of something you wanted. If this is the case, you totally succeeded.)

Anyway, this story is definitely great. You totally wrote the feelings well, I felt like I was the characters and it was amazing. I do hope there would be some kind of sequel? I'd like to know if one day, Baekhyun and the moon would eventually meet. Maybe some kind of magical thing in it but anyway, even if there's not a sequel, this fic is definitely one of my favorite.

I'm not good at making comments, but since this story was really good, that Chenbaek is heaven and that this exchange is the best, I'm making some kind of effort haha. I hope my comment wasn't too long or too crapy.

Thanks for writing

[sorakim_90]

It's so beautiful and sad at the same time. Like the lover didn't meant to each other. Simple but so full of angst