safe up here with you ✿ for ailiblue

Jan 17, 2015 22:14

Title: safe up here with you
Recipient: ailiblue
Rating: G
Word Count: 2512 words
Summary: Baekhyun on the outside seems to be a really charming kid who is friends with everyone but late every night he confesses his unexplainable loneliness to the moon. Little does he know there is a boy on the moon always listening to him.
Warning/s: second person pov ._ ( Read more... )

pairing: baekhyun/chen, rating: g, !fic, !round1

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hanakolexie January 17 2015, 21:44:18 UTC

This story was amazing. Like seriously.

At first I was afraid that I wouldn't like the second person POV (I couldn't read a book because of it, no matter how good the book was) but since this story is short, it was totally bearable. And I have to admit it gave something, a plus, to the story. I almost felt as lonely as "the moon" reading it (which I think was kind of something you wanted. If this is the case, you totally succeeded.)

Anyway, this story is definitely great. You totally wrote the feelings well, I felt like I was the characters and it was amazing. I do hope there would be some kind of sequel? I'd like to know if one day, Baekhyun and the moon would eventually meet. Maybe some kind of magical thing in it but anyway, even if there's not a sequel, this fic is definitely one of my favorite.

I'm not good at making comments, but since this story was really good, that Chenbaek is heaven and that this exchange is the best, I'm making some kind of effort haha. I hope my comment wasn't too long or too crapy.

Thanks for writing such a masterpiece for such a beautiful ship. Good job author-nim. ♡

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