simply put, i love this! i love your baekchen! i love you! /sorry i must go to bed because of work tomorrow but i will be back to write you the comment you deserve on the weekend/ ♥
No No No! i feel terrible that you saw this before I could come back and write a proper comment but better late than never? ♥
first off, i know nothing about coffee other than always picking something iced & that has caramel in the name but your fic made me want to learn and brought back such fond memories of this one coffee house i used to frequent back in Seoul with the adorable apron-wearing hipster baristas :)
Matte chestnut-colored hair, prominent cheeks a bit too high to Baekhyun’s liking, thick black fashionable glasses resting on top of them, and attire that to Baekhyun’s standards were passable /evil laugh/ you say that now Byun Baekhyun but just watch how quickly you fall for those charms
So when Baekhyun had just quickly and innocently glanced at the new client and noticed the, so to say, peculiar gaze said client was holding on Minseok, Baekhyun whined like an upset puppy and let his head fall to the cash register in a dull thump.upset whining puppy is exactly my image of Baekhyun 95% of the time, specially when it
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Part II!! can i just say I am so grateful that you wrote them even after they got together because a lot of the fics this round were also really good but most ended right when baekchen get together and i am left craving/wondering/feeling restless because I want the good stuff that is baekchen being two cheesy fluffy idiots in love and an established relationship
the whole part with curious baek asking jongdae questions about how it works had me LOLing, LMAOing, ROFLing and “ur so cute”ing too :D and baek kissing dae behind the menu!! their coffee guessing game! baek insisting on being called 'hyung'
Jongdae smirked proudly before plunging in to kiss Baekhyun again, a hand at Baekhyun’s hip, bringing him closer, as if the latter were his prize for winning.everything after this, i was a goner. no one talk to me
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I super enjoyed this!!! I love how Jongdae was so focused on Minseok but he ended up getting stolen away by Baekhyun, and in turn Jongdae stole Baekhyun back without him even really realizing it. I love their conversations and just in general hanging out and becoming close, and Jongdae's dedication!!
I also really enjoyed the side story with Lu Han pining over Minseok and the humour of how he reacts to anyone touching him, and how Baekhyun agreeing to help led to so much more!
This was so cute and funny and all. I loved Luhan's character haha. I have to admit that I don't like coffee at all (just the smell of it almost makes me want to puke) but while reading your story, I wanted to drink so coffee. It was a weird feeling but it was good.
I really liked barista Baekhyun and customer Jongdae. Their relationship evolved so cutely I couldn't. And you even wrote smut irkfkfelelldof you're the best. There's not a lot (and not enough) Chenbaek fanfics in the world, and there's even less smutty Chenbaek fanfics. So thank you and let me hug you /gives a big hug.
Your story was amazing, I really liked it. Thank you!
Oh my God!! They're so sweet. "Baekhyun kissed Jongdae’s temple as an apology" this is happened even before they confess to each other. At the last paragraph of part 1, I thought this is the end, I'm like nooo, how can it end so fast and then I realize there's still another next button, lol. And I like it when JD call Baek hyung :)
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first off, i know nothing about coffee other than always picking something iced & that has caramel in the name but your fic made me want to learn and brought back such fond memories of this one coffee house i used to frequent back in Seoul with the adorable apron-wearing hipster baristas :)
Matte chestnut-colored hair, prominent cheeks a bit too high to Baekhyun’s liking, thick black fashionable glasses resting on top of them, and attire that to Baekhyun’s standards were passable
/evil laugh/ you say that now Byun Baekhyun but just watch how quickly you fall for those charms
So when Baekhyun had just quickly and innocently glanced at the new client and noticed the, so to say, peculiar gaze said client was holding on Minseok, Baekhyun whined like an upset puppy and let his head fall to the cash register in a dull thump.upset whining puppy is exactly my image of Baekhyun 95% of the time, specially when it ( ... )
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the whole part with curious baek asking jongdae questions about how it works had me LOLing, LMAOing, ROFLing and “ur so cute”ing too :D and baek kissing dae behind the menu!! their coffee guessing game! baek insisting on being called 'hyung'
Jongdae smirked proudly before plunging in to kiss Baekhyun again, a hand at Baekhyun’s hip, bringing him closer, as if the latter were his prize for winning.everything after this, i was a goner. no one talk to me ( ... )
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I also really enjoyed the side story with Lu Han pining over Minseok and the humour of how he reacts to anyone touching him, and how Baekhyun agreeing to help led to so much more!
Good job, thanks for writing this <3
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This was so cute and funny and all. I loved Luhan's character haha. I have to admit that I don't like coffee at all (just the smell of it almost makes me want to puke) but while reading your story, I wanted to drink so coffee. It was a weird feeling but it was good.
I really liked barista Baekhyun and customer Jongdae. Their relationship evolved so cutely I couldn't. And you even wrote smut irkfkfelelldof you're the best. There's not a lot (and not enough) Chenbaek fanfics in the world, and there's even less smutty Chenbaek fanfics. So thank you and let me hug you /gives a big hug.
Your story was amazing, I really liked it. Thank you!
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At the last paragraph of part 1, I thought this is the end, I'm like nooo, how can it end so fast and then I realize there's still another next button, lol.
And I like it when JD call Baek hyung :)
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