No No No! i feel terrible that you saw this before I could come back and write a proper comment but better late than never? ♥
first off, i know nothing about coffee other than always picking something iced & that has caramel in the name but your fic made me want to learn and brought back such fond memories of this one coffee house i used to frequent back in Seoul with the adorable apron-wearing hipster baristas :)
Matte chestnut-colored hair, prominent cheeks a bit too high to Baekhyun’s liking, thick black fashionable glasses resting on top of them, and attire that to Baekhyun’s standards were passable /evil laugh/ you say that now Byun Baekhyun but just watch how quickly you fall for those charms
So when Baekhyun had just quickly and innocently glanced at the new client and noticed the, so to say, peculiar gaze said client was holding on Minseok, Baekhyun whined like an upset puppy and let his head fall to the cash register in a dull thump. upset whining puppy is exactly my image of Baekhyun 95% of the time, specially when it comes to Jongdae so this little passage had me squealing.
your Luhan is so prissy, petty, shameless and obnoxious (and A LUNATIC) lol but i can't help but find him adorable. my 2nd favorite character in this fic because baekchen will always be tied for 1st place in my heart and your baekchen is just the best pair of cute fluffy bundles of love and rainbow sprinkles. i want to carry them both in my pocket!
A layered heart!! even the coffee knows byun baekhyun, dont try to deny the inevitable :D
“I won’t be trying to seduce him. I’m not into guys.” /evil laughs some more/ oh baby baek you are in for an awakening
“Ah, sorry. I don’t know your name…” started Jongdae with a friendly smile. to be honest, it was only at this point that i realized that Jongdae didn't even know Baekhyun's name... and my heart cried a little for baek but that whole conversation about milk frothing ermm lol i dont know why it was so cute but they were tottaaaalllly flirrrting
Kyungsoo sighed. “I’m not an interpreter. Go figure out the ‘and’ by yourself.” Kyungsoo always gets the best lines in baekchen/chinguline fics
“Considering the twenty seven cups of latte you’ve drunk over the past four hours, you’ll have diarrhea and a hard time falling asleep tonight.” gross! Jongdae why. boundaries! this playground level flirting... but that's what i love most about baekchen. they are such bros but everything they say and do is cute and natural and teasing and flirty and did i mention cute?
despondent Baekhyunnie, let me love you ♥
NO DUMBDAE YOU DID NOT!! i was so ready to smack the boy on the back of his head for asking Baekhyun if Minseok is single. You set me up for this heartbreak by making it seem like Minseok was out of the picture /wailing/
oh but wait
“I was just curious. I had a crush on him, and all.”
and
“I’ll leave that obvious interpretation to you, Baekhyun,” Jongdae narrowed his eyes, in a careful but playful way, player level = Kim Jongdae
nicely played dear author, nicely played! you set us up for heartbreak only to pull a sweet surprise ♥
the heart-fluttering tension when jongdae tells baekhyun he can stay over! i loved every second of it.
At most he was just testing the waters. At most he was admitting things to himself. At most he was giving in. At most, he was in love. at most i'm in love with baekchen and this fic
He leaned closer to Baekhyun, smiling a bit lazily. Baekhyun kissed Jongdae’s temple as an apology, ... and their different heartbeats slowly becoming synchronized. And then Jongdae finally said it, every word dropping like shooting stars across a navy sky.
Part II!! can i just say I am so grateful that you wrote them even after they got together because a lot of the fics this round were also really good but most ended right when baekchen get together and i am left craving/wondering/feeling restless because I want the good stuff that is baekchen being two cheesy fluffy idiots in love and an established relationship
the whole part with curious baek asking jongdae questions about how it works had me LOLing, LMAOing, ROFLing and “ur so cute”ing too :D and baek kissing dae behind the menu!! their coffee guessing game! baek insisting on being called 'hyung'
Jongdae smirked proudly before plunging in to kiss Baekhyun again, a hand at Baekhyun’s hip, bringing him closer, as if the latter were his prize for winning. everything after this, i was a goner. no one talk to me!
in general, the ease of their interactions and the way you write them is so soothing and soft and unhurried .. its really like that comforting all encompassing warm feeling that being in a coffee shop gives you and the little details were so charming like the coffee jar labelled “B.B. (don’t cry)”, sweet Yixing baking sweet treats in the backroom, popular rapper turned actor Tao :D.. as i said, i just loved everything to bits and /bats eyelashes annoyingly/ write more baekchen-- please and thankyou
♥
first off, i know nothing about coffee other than always picking something iced & that has caramel in the name but your fic made me want to learn and brought back such fond memories of this one coffee house i used to frequent back in Seoul with the adorable apron-wearing hipster baristas :)
Matte chestnut-colored hair, prominent cheeks a bit too high to Baekhyun’s liking, thick black fashionable glasses resting on top of them, and attire that to Baekhyun’s standards were passable
/evil laugh/ you say that now Byun Baekhyun but just watch how quickly you fall for those charms
So when Baekhyun had just quickly and innocently glanced at the new client and noticed the, so to say, peculiar gaze said client was holding on Minseok, Baekhyun whined like an upset puppy and let his head fall to the cash register in a dull thump.
upset whining puppy is exactly my image of Baekhyun 95% of the time, specially when it comes to Jongdae so this little passage had me squealing.
your Luhan is so prissy, petty, shameless and obnoxious (and A LUNATIC) lol but i can't help but find him adorable. my 2nd favorite character in this fic because baekchen will always be tied for 1st place in my heart and your baekchen is just the best pair of cute fluffy bundles of love and rainbow sprinkles. i want to carry them both in my pocket!
A layered heart!! even the coffee knows byun baekhyun, dont try to deny the inevitable :D
“I won’t be trying to seduce him. I’m not into guys.”
/evil laughs some more/ oh baby baek you are in for an awakening
“Ah, sorry. I don’t know your name…” started Jongdae with a friendly smile.
to be honest, it was only at this point that i realized that Jongdae didn't even know Baekhyun's name... and my heart cried a little for baek but that whole conversation about milk frothing ermm lol i dont know why it was so cute but they were tottaaaalllly flirrrting
Kyungsoo sighed. “I’m not an interpreter. Go figure out the ‘and’ by yourself.”
Kyungsoo always gets the best lines in baekchen/chinguline fics
“Considering the twenty seven cups of latte you’ve drunk over the past four hours, you’ll have diarrhea and a hard time falling asleep tonight.”
gross! Jongdae why. boundaries! this playground level flirting... but that's what i love most about baekchen. they are such bros but everything they say and do is cute and natural and teasing and flirty and did i mention cute?
despondent Baekhyunnie, let me love you ♥
NO DUMBDAE YOU DID NOT!! i was so ready to smack the boy on the back of his head for asking Baekhyun if Minseok is single. You set me up for this heartbreak by making it seem like Minseok was out of the picture /wailing/
oh but wait
“I was just curious. I had a crush on him, and all.”
and
“I’ll leave that obvious interpretation to you, Baekhyun,” Jongdae narrowed his eyes, in a careful but playful way,
player level = Kim Jongdae
nicely played dear author, nicely played! you set us up for heartbreak only to pull a sweet surprise ♥
the heart-fluttering tension when jongdae tells baekhyun he can stay over! i loved every second of it.
At most he was just testing the waters.
At most he was admitting things to himself.
At most he was giving in.
At most, he was in love.
at most i'm in love with baekchen and this fic
He leaned closer to Baekhyun, smiling a bit lazily.
Baekhyun kissed Jongdae’s temple as an apology,
... and their different heartbeats slowly becoming synchronized.
And then Jongdae finally said it, every word dropping like shooting stars across a navy sky.
EVERYTHING ♥
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the whole part with curious baek asking jongdae questions about how it works had me LOLing, LMAOing, ROFLing and “ur so cute”ing too :D and baek kissing dae behind the menu!! their coffee guessing game! baek insisting on being called 'hyung'
Jongdae smirked proudly before plunging in to kiss Baekhyun again, a hand at Baekhyun’s hip, bringing him closer, as if the latter were his prize for winning.
everything after this, i was a goner. no one talk to me!
in general, the ease of their interactions and the way you write them is so soothing and soft and unhurried .. its really like that comforting all encompassing warm feeling that being in a coffee shop gives you and the little details were so charming like the coffee jar labelled “B.B. (don’t cry)”, sweet Yixing baking sweet treats in the backroom, popular rapper turned actor Tao :D.. as i said, i just loved everything to bits and /bats eyelashes annoyingly/ write more baekchen-- please and thankyou
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