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piecewise ✿ for the_rising_dawn

Jan 14, 2015 22:41

Title: piecewise
Recipient: the_rising_dawn
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4170 words
Summary: A cautionary tale of causation and consequence. (Alternatively, this is how Jongdae finds his place.)
Warning/s: alcohol mentions, sex mentions
Notes: big thanks to DY and SY for telling me to write when i was procrastinating! this would probably be unfinished and even worse ( Read more... )

pairing: baekhyun/chen, !fic, rating: pg, !round1

Comments 7

the_rising_dawn January 14 2015, 21:52:53 UTC

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the_rising_dawn January 22 2015, 13:10:50 UTC

OKAY IM HERE IM SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG life got in the way and I felt more terrible every day I didnt reply to this ( ... )

gloomvalleys January 25 2015, 20:50:46 UTC

IT'S NO PROBLEM AT ALL! I'M ENDLESSLY PLEASED THAT IT TURNED OUT THE WAY YOU WANTED!!!

your prompts were great, this one especially! i enjoyed reading your comment it kinda made my day too!

sorakim_90 January 18 2015, 11:25:48 UTC

It was fun reading this. I can't get the smile out of my face every time I read their interaction in the column. And when finally Baek know about Mateo I feel like throwing my phone, like 'yes, finally they know', lol. But I kinda feel weird with the last part where Baek know JD is Mateo, and their confession like it being cut suddenly and too rushed. But the ending, it just perfect.

gloomvalleys January 25 2015, 20:36:32 UTC

AHHH thank you for the lovely comment i'm super glad you enjoyed it. to a certain extent haha. it's true, i was pretty rushed while writing the Big Reveal scene so it definitely comes across as jarring. i'm considering extending that scene/adding more/editing the rest more before crossposting on my journal. piecewise: remastered??? hmmm stay tuned

soft_daisy January 20 2015, 01:29:59 UTC

This was so much fun to read! :'D I love how Jongdae replied to all of Baekhyun's questions, and all of the questions seemed fairly realistic too so I could relate. It was also sweet how worried Baekhyun was when he found out about Chen being Matteo. The cheeky question at the end was perfect and it really felt like you could trace their friendship/relationship through their q&a's lol. Thank you for writing and sharing with us!

gloomvalleys January 25 2015, 20:47:17 UTC

thanks so much for reading and commenting! i'm really happy that you really picked up on what i was going for. glad you liked it :)