i wanna see you but you're not mine ✿ for bcnf3nf

[daelightmods]

Title: i wanna see you but you’re not mine
Recipient: bcnf3nf
Rating: PG-13
Side pairing/s: N/A
Word Count: 6487 words
Summary: Jongdae’s not sure if Baekhyun just wants to get back together or if he just really needs a place to stay at.
Warning/s: N/A

Notes: thank you m for talking some sense into me whenever i’d seem to drift off to someplace else, ilu

Comments

[bcnf3nf]

I HAVE ARRIVEDDD

first of all excuse me if this comment doesnt make sense because hakjdhsladahjsd your writing im sO

tbh when i wrote this prompt i was expecting crack but thiss???????? how DO U knO i love being sa D ilu already

i LOVELOVELOVE the entire second part... why are your words beautiful idk how to express how much i like this part.....
Whatever makes you happy nOooO

“It’s only weird if we make it weird.” he lectures with his mouth half-full.
Jongdae tries to look Baekhyun in the eyes, only to discover that he’s too busy trying to avoid eye contact this whole time. “It’s only weird if you still can’t look me in the eyes.” ITS WEIRD

“I knew you two were together even before the both of you knew it yourselves.”
“Everyone knew.” Chanyeol added. TBH

Baekhyun still doesn’t get programming until now, so he didn’t bother Jongdae JONGDAE IS A PROGRAMMER YOU MAKE ALL MY DREAMS COME TRU E

“Well, we both liked How I Met Your Mother.” ME TOO

Jongdae laughs as he closes in on Baekhyun, pressing his body against the thin boy’s

[bcnf3nf]

now for the more coherent part of this comment.

hello author. thank you SO MUCH for writing this ;u; i love this ;u; i am so sad for the most part but then again i love being sad over fics so technically i am very happy ;u;

(also!!! the jongdae is a programmer part [queen voice] is this the real life is this just fantasy)

thank you ♥♥♥

[yolseo]

ok first can i just say PROGRAMMER JONGDAE WEARING HIS RIMMED GLASSES WHILE HE WORKS THAT IS THE DREAM

i hope i didn't make you too sad huhu and you gave really qt and wonderful prompts i wish i had the ability to write them all ;____; i really had fun writing this, i'm glad you liked it!! ♡

[yolseo]

chinguline is just squad goals 4 lyf hehe thank you!! ♡

[afiremess]

I like the transition of Jongdae's thoughts from past to the present and vice versa.
I cant choose my fave lines bc I LOVE THE WHOLE FIC and it'd be a waste of time to copy it and paste them all here LMAO

[yolseo]

omg thank you why are you too kind ;____; ♡

[sorakim_90]

I just can't describe it with word, there's so much emotion that I have while reading this. Most of it surely is a frustration. Why did they like to make it complicated, seriously, I can't even understand what is their reason for break up. But overall I really enjoy your story, thank you very much

[yolseo]

sorry if it frustrated you omg?? ;____; and no, thank you ♡ hehe

[ailiblue]

Ah I finally got around to commenting!

I loved your fic (cause apparently I like being sad XD)!
Jongdae post-breakup was literally me. I think I understood a bit too well how he was feeling. It sucks when relationships get bad, but the end gives me hope that they'll work it out and the relationship is less dysfunctional, haha.

The part about JD's dad made me hold my breath. I really thought he had abandoned him!

Anyways, thank you for writing! Sorry for the rambling.

[yolseo]

I LIKE BEING SAD TOO omg thank you so much for reading!!