i wanna see you but you're not mine ✿ for bcnf3nf

Jan 09, 2015 21:27

Title: i wanna see you but you’re not mine
Recipient: bcnf3nf
Rating: PG-13
Side pairing/s: N/A
Word Count: 6487 words
Summary: Jongdae’s not sure if Baekhyun just wants to get back together or if he just really needs a place to stay at.
Warning/s: N/A

Notes: thank you m for talking some sense into me whenever i’d seem to drift off to someplace else, ilu ( Read more... )

pairing: baekhyun/chen, rating: pg-13, !fic, !round1

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bcnf3nf January 9 2015, 16:48:48 UTC
I HAVE ARRIVEDDD

first of all excuse me if this comment doesnt make sense because hakjdhsladahjsd your writing im sO

tbh when i wrote this prompt i was expecting crack but thiss???????? how DO U knO i love being sa D ilu already

i LOVELOVELOVE the entire second part... why are your words beautiful idk how to express how much i like this part.....
Whatever makes you happy nOooO

“It’s only weird if we make it weird.” he lectures with his mouth half-full.
Jongdae tries to look Baekhyun in the eyes, only to discover that he’s too busy trying to avoid eye contact this whole time. “It’s only weird if you still can’t look me in the eyes.” ITS WEIRD

“I knew you two were together even before the both of you knew it yourselves.”
“Everyone knew.” Chanyeol added. TBH

Baekhyun still doesn’t get programming until now, so he didn’t bother Jongdae JONGDAE IS A PROGRAMMER YOU MAKE ALL MY DREAMS COME TRU E

“Well, we both liked How I Met Your Mother.” ME TOO

Jongdae laughs as he closes in on Baekhyun, pressing his body against the thin boy’s side, his arms enveloping Baekhyun into a loose hug. He doesn’t care if he’s breaking the barriers, but maybe he wants to, just this once. ghhghghegrhgrhrghgrhrgrhrghr

“Stop finding excuses to sleep with me.” Jongdae had said instead
And maybe Jongdae was just finding excuses to stay close to him a little longer. He knew that from that day on, he had to keep finding excuses.
“God, Jongdae,” he mutters under a sigh, and he shifts a little closer. “Stop trying to sleep with me.” AM I QUOTING THE ENTIRE FIC? I PROBABLY AM IDC

“I missed you.”
And that’s all it takes to turn Jongdae into an emotional mess. “Stop,” Jongdae replies a little too sharply. “you’re drunk.” im so sad.......... ive been sad the entire fic but i AM SO SAD

the entire part in the morning after the kiss........ “We’re idiots aren’t we?” YOU ARE

the ending ;A; im so ;A; pls stop being stupid and stay together ;A;

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bcnf3nf January 9 2015, 16:54:19 UTC
now for the more coherent part of this comment.

hello author. thank you SO MUCH for writing this ;u; i love this ;u; i am so sad for the most part but then again i love being sad over fics so technically i am very happy ;u;

(also!!! the jongdae is a programmer part [queen voice] is this the real life is this just fantasy)

thank you ♥♥♥

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yolseo January 20 2015, 11:51:13 UTC
ok first can i just say PROGRAMMER JONGDAE WEARING HIS RIMMED GLASSES WHILE HE WORKS THAT IS THE DREAM

i hope i didn't make you too sad huhu and you gave really qt and wonderful prompts i wish i had the ability to write them all ;____; i really had fun writing this, i'm glad you liked it!! ♡

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