Comments | theclockiswrong: (drabble) Breathe the air before you drown

theclockiswrong

(drabble) Breathe the air before you drown

Sep 20, 2010 19:39

Very, very uninspired bah! :(

Breathe the air before you drown | R
Kyuhyun/Ryeowook
Someone comes to take Kyuhyun home.

( Kyuhyun learned that loneliness was more frightening than the ghosts inside his storybooks and the giant black spiders that crawled on the walls in his old house. )

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theclockiswrong September 20 2010, 11:50:17 UTC

I didn't exactly specify Kyuhyun's and Ryeowook's age, but I suppose it doesn't really matter. Ryeowook is just taking Kyuhyun home ;)

Haha, he'd bite :[

fruitdrizzles September 20 2010, 14:18:14 UTC

STILL SPOT YOUR COOKIE MONSTER RAWR

coregurlz September 20 2010, 12:53:23 UTC

spot~

coregurlz September 20 2010, 13:54:23 UTC

WHat do unnie meant with underground?Kyuhyun had die already and he just waiting for someone to take him home?
I can't understand this drabble but I will act like I understand the drabble..hahahaha!!!
Thanks for sharing this scary fic,maybe?huhuhu..saranghae unnie~ and Hwaiting!! ^~^

theclockiswrong September 20 2010, 15:09:06 UTC

I didn't expect this story to be this confusing really o__o Well, you shouldn't think so deep into this one. Just read it as it is :) There's no deeper meaning to it even though my writing seems to leave a lot of place for questioning -__-

fruitdrizzles September 21 2010, 14:26:15 UTC

scarlett ~

fruitdrizzles September 20 2010, 14:17:58 UTC

T.T just as frustrated as you. how many metaphors did you put in here? D8

theclockiswrong September 20 2010, 15:01:43 UTC

Hahaha the story is just as it is really o__o o__o o__o Is it really that metaphorical? o__o Well, I suppose it's because you're suppose the put the pieces together to make the beginning and end? o__o My writing has become so difficult to understand, I guess lol.

fruitdrizzles September 21 2010, 14:24:27 UTC

uh.. huh. D8
or maybe i should just improve my english. TT

theclockiswrong September 22 2010, 08:23:30 UTC

Haha, no, it's alright. I guess my tendencies to leave things unexplained and vague is confusing lol :) This drabble is just for practice anyways. Any feedback is good :D

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blue_cranes September 20 2010, 23:29:55 UTC

Oooh, I like this one! And I like how it's pretty much open to your own opinion and perseption. :)

theclockiswrong September 21 2010, 09:37:46 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad you think so ^^ There isn't anything deep about this story, but I was beginning to think that it was written too vaguely to make any sense from it -.-