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(drabble) Breathe the air before you drown

Sep 20, 2010 19:39

Very, very uninspired bah! :(

Breathe the air before you drown | R
Kyuhyun/Ryeowook
Someone comes to take Kyuhyun home.

( Kyuhyun learned that loneliness was more frightening than the ghosts inside his storybooks and the giant black spiders that crawled on the walls in his old house. )

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fruitdrizzles September 20 2010, 14:17:58 UTC

T.T just as frustrated as you. how many metaphors did you put in here? D8

theclockiswrong September 20 2010, 15:01:43 UTC

Hahaha the story is just as it is really o__o o__o o__o Is it really that metaphorical? o__o Well, I suppose it's because you're suppose the put the pieces together to make the beginning and end? o__o My writing has become so difficult to understand, I guess lol.

fruitdrizzles September 21 2010, 14:24:27 UTC

uh.. huh. D8
or maybe i should just improve my english. TT

theclockiswrong September 22 2010, 08:23:30 UTC

Haha, no, it's alright. I guess my tendencies to leave things unexplained and vague is confusing lol :) This drabble is just for practice anyways. Any feedback is good :D

fruitdrizzles September 22 2010, 10:41:15 UTC

myahh! where are you on Twitter anyway? you ebil stalkerz..

i have nothing to say about this drabble. oh but do you know that my fish is named HenLi? inspired by your HenWook fic laa ~ thankyuu! ^^

theclockiswrong September 22 2010, 11:36:42 UTC

It's a secret, hurr ;)

Aww ♥ Henli shall have a very happy life ^__^

fruitdrizzles September 22 2010, 21:32:13 UTC

noh! KyuWook ftw ~
anyway he just swims around. he doesnt even eat. unless i dont watch him.

secret? eh? D8

theclockiswrong September 23 2010, 05:21:32 UTC

Henli is a shy fish :B Maybe you should consider getting him a friend :3

Not really a secret, but if you won't regret finding me, I won't mind telling you lol... :P

fruitdrizzles September 23 2010, 13:08:52 UTC

oh and HenLi is a fighting fish. if it were a goldfish, hiding the filters will be a torture. from my bed (one end of the room) to the toilet.

im just lucky that my hostel is one of the rare ones with joined bathrooms. i hide HenLi in a bucket. he loves staring at my giant jar of Oreos. *weird fish*

theclockiswrong September 23 2010, 13:30:44 UTC

A fighting fish? Haha, I see ^^

He lives in a bucket?? o__o Lol, oreos ♥ Haha, somehow, hearing about Henli makes me happy lol

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