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Straw Wife

Oct 19, 2008 14:56

Title: Straw Wife
Author: 4thlaw
Fandom: Philadelphia Phillies
Pairing: Pat Burrell/Chase Utley
Rating: R-ish?
Summary: Michelle Burrell tells it from her point of view.
Disclaimer: I've said it before and I'll say it again, it's fiction. I made it up.

( Straw Wife )

rating: r, char.: pat burrell, pairing: utley/burrell, char.: chase utley, team: philadelphia phillies, type: slash, author: #

Comments 5

bullpenbrat22 October 19 2008, 20:23:55 UTC

Great story! Well said and well described.

careless123 October 19 2008, 21:56:33 UTC

that was so good. i luv the pat/chase pairing

niki4jm October 20 2008, 00:38:37 UTC

This is really good :)

ilive4this_38 October 20 2008, 02:11:11 UTC

ahh! that is my favorite paring. What an interesting look at them.

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4thlaw October 20 2008, 20:29:32 UTC

Thanks everybody! *bashful smile* I tried to give Michelle her own voice and not write from mine. Glad everyone liked it!