girl, you're like a weird vacation, 3/3, adam/kris

[moirariordan]

girl, you're like a weird vacation
part one | part two

Comments

[pinkeurogirl]

wow. kradam as girls are cute and hot too! :-) loved the slow burn

[moirariordan]

Thank you! :)

[moirariordan]

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it, lol. :DD

[gypsycaravan]

I really like this! I like how Adam and Kris still felt like themselves, if that makes sense. Thanks for sharing :)

[moirariordan]

Thank you! I'm glad their characterization translated. :)

[moirariordan]

Haha, I was thinking that she was drunk and trying to write with the pen that wasn't working. But I'll leave that up to anyone to imagine what they want. :P

[sand_dais]

This was really beautiful to read. I love the development of Kris and Adam's relationship from friends to something more and that we can see how important they become to each other. It was interesting reading about them as girls but also a little weird. You did a such great job of keeping them in character that I kept forgetting that they were girls in this story and then I would be really surprised when I saw the words "she" or "her". That last scene in the alley was so sweet a perfect end to the story.

[moirariordan]

Thank you so much, what an awesome comment. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[eirana_regan]

I'm in tears. This was gorgeous. Kudos to you for keeping them them despite the, umm, obvious changes. It's beautifully written and the interactions and the progression felt so natural. Wonderful job.

(It also makes me feel like less of an oddball for wanting to write girl!kradam as well.)

[elizaria]

This was great. Liked the way you kept them Adam/Kris even as there were differences that only made it obvs these characters were themselves. I really cared about them, what happened to them.

\0/

[moirariordan]

Thank you so much, :DD

[moirariordan]

I am of the opinion that there can never ever be enough genderbend, so have at it, my friend.

Also, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D