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shanwens January 23 2014, 03:21:53 UTC
taking the first spot i'm sorry ahhhh
i really like all the different relationships in here! a lot of them are similar but subtly different and i like that realism
i also especially like your characterization of baekhyun, although my heart ached a lot while reading about all his thoughts ;;
you really broke my heart with jongdae at the end with the i almost wanted to be with you forever and his shaking hands and ; ~~~ ;
but ~kyungsoo~ so that's okay!!! or it will be
and then
this is d real me
deal with it ;)

i olredi am (^___^)b
BYE CUTIES
i haven't read a lot of business-centered fics but i think this was nicely done ++ cute domestic feelings and a lil dash of heartache!! thank you for writing this ^___^

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onyu January 31 2014, 06:47:53 UTC
Ah, I'm so glad the characterization of Baekhyun worked ;~~; Negl I don't write in his POV that much, and I was so worried I'm make him come across as a douchebag or an asshole or sth, but in reality he's an absolute sweetheart who cares a lot about his friends? Ah, Baekhyun. :'(

That said, thank you SO MUCH for reading this! Really, really glad you liked it. :)

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sunlit January 23 2014, 11:00:49 UTC
i'm just---- /starfishes on the floor weakly

i don't know where to begin, tbh?? i've always liked settings like this, but you took it to a whole new level, and i enjoyed the glimpse into the busy, busy life of media agencies! the way you string your words together is all different kinds of amazing o m g it's poetic and descriptive all at the same time, i adore it so much ;___; one thing i liked in particular was how the story kind of brought me so many places as i read - the restaurants, the different apartments, the streets; the imagery is lovely ♥

that said, yoooouuuuur chaaaraaacteeeeerrrrs aaaaah flops all over ;; no words for how lovely your baekchensoo bff trio is! that one scene that alluded to a little bit of their background - how it's always just been them, and at some point, baekhyun and chensoo - is both heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. i felt so emotionally invested in your baekhyun shdfjlkdshfd oh man my heart dropped and flew in sync with his and just. can i just say i wanted to smush them together at ( ... )

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onyu January 31 2014, 06:51:00 UTC
CHELSEA!!! You know how I feel about you feeling satisfied with this fic and all my struggles and I just want to say THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING, for holding my hand and spotting my atrocious errors and rubbing circles on my back during my writing anxiety attacks (lol). I wouldn't have been able to do this without you. :') /cue emo music

Also, I still blame you for my love for Baekhyun. Really. :( ♥

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airplanewishes January 23 2014, 14:24:51 UTC
I'm in love with this. Just to share, my major was actually marketing and have been immersed in studying advertising and media agencies. Our professors worked in the agencies you mentioned. Aaah this really made me so excited and giddy!!! I remember taking a media planning class and it's just... not for me. Lol. So I really appreciate the level of detail in their jobs and the culture was so well-written. I've never personally gotten into the advertising industry but have a lot of friends who are in it and this is really how it is, this kind of chaos ( ... )

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onyu January 31 2014, 06:56:30 UTC
I've already told you this on Twitter but o m g, what are the odds of my recipient having media background. It's as if this was a match made in heaven! /cheesy THAT SAID, oh God, I... am so floored and honored to have been assigned to you. Negl, when I saw the assignment email I almost freaked out because YOU, YOU! You are SuBaek and SuBaek is you and you write such fantastic stories! It was such a challenge to write this, primarily because this is the first time I've ever written SuBaek, and I don't write in Baekhyun's POV often.

So there's that.

But ah, I'm really, really glad it worked out in the end and that you enjoyed the fic. Your prompts were amazing, and it was hard to not come up with something nice, at the very least! Thank you for the prompts and for the love you've given this fic ♥

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fashcndy January 24 2014, 00:53:19 UTC
this is perfect okay. this is like, my new favorite subaek.

first of all, the friendship dynamics and characterizations are so perfect. everyone. even the characters that barely appear, like jongin. omg this was really emotional for me. just how baekchen was and kyungsoo was always there and everyone. just everyone. even kris. lol

thank you so much for writing such amazing au. i love when i can immerse myself in the au. i've never been to korea but it feels like i have and i know where everything is. i love how i can relate even though i shouldn't.

amazing amazing amazing.

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onyu January 31 2014, 06:59:03 UTC
OH GOSH, SUCH KIND WORDS T____T Glad the characterizations worked! I hardly write in Baekhyun's POV, so I had a major characterization scare while writing. Haha! But um, yes! I'm really glad you liked the fic :D Thank you so much! ♥

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zsuness January 24 2014, 12:17:38 UTC
*applauds* this was such an amazing and well written story.
i love your writing style.
i felt a roller-coaster of emotions while reading it and i'm still under its influence.
you made it so easy to relate to this and get emotionally invested in baekhyun's character. ;;
idek i fail at words. but i really loved this.
thank you for writing & sharing it. ♥

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onyu January 31 2014, 06:59:38 UTC
Awww, thank you! I hope you're feeling much better now? Haha~ Glad you liked this! ♥

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