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Fic: A Deeper Look (5/?)

Nov 22, 2010 17:28

Title: A Deeper Look (5/?)
Genre: Angst/Drama
Pairing: Kurt/Karofsky pre-slash.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1050 this chapter // 5800 overall
Summary: He's never heard slurs like that thrown around and not directed at himself. Written for the glee_angst_meme prompt here.
Previous Chapters: Located at the directory here.

( I don't want my son to be... )

kurt/karofsky, drama, angst, a deeper look

Comments 14

corbly November 23 2010, 01:50:24 UTC

I loved this chapter, but I have to nitpick a little:

He ends up falling asleep.

He comes to school the next morning ... He hasn’t slept in days and his head just hurts so bad that it’s sickening

I can't wait for the next chapter. <3

theauthor2010 November 23 2010, 01:52:02 UTC

LMAO those little things always seem to get me. Thanks for noticing that.

<3 Thank you.

joshiemae November 23 2010, 02:24:58 UTC

-dances-
I'm loving this fic.

lolz at he fact that Dave has no idea what a GSA is.
We have a pretty largely sized one at my school. They had a debate last week with the Fellowship of Christian Athletes. :U

-Off topic-

Totally excited for the next part.

theauthor2010 November 23 2010, 02:46:22 UTC

Thank you so much!
We had a pretty good GSA at my school when I was in HS too. Glad you liked.

therealmarajade November 23 2010, 04:54:05 UTC

Loved the "jedi-gay-dad" thing. :)

theauthor2010 November 23 2010, 19:26:06 UTC

Hehehe thanks! Burt is so super powered.

rioalexa November 23 2010, 05:42:18 UTC

Poor Karofsky. Hopefully he will show up to the GSA (if they can get one passed). Thanks for giving both sides on the phone conversation.

Update soon!!!

theauthor2010 November 23 2010, 19:32:11 UTC

Definitely can't wait to develop it. Thank you!

revengent November 23 2010, 06:31:07 UTC

Oh I hope that their GSA will be able to pass! forever bitter that the proposed GSA was never allowed when I was in high school

That last image of him getting hit by a slushie is so chilling (pun not intended). It's like, the start of everything that's going to be changning for him.

theauthor2010 November 23 2010, 19:27:59 UTC

Awww! :( That's horrible about your high school. Mine had a pretty good GSA, but in Southern California that's easier than in some other places.

Yeah...it's so sad but it's going to be an interesting path to redemption.

Now I'm off to cower about how the show may/may not plan on doing that.