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theatrebob1

I'm Your Villain

Sep 22, 2009 18:50

“Fuck! Where did they go?” Alfons stopped short; looked around frantically. His nose was bright red, and the large wart that engulfed his face, if possible, seemed even bigger today.

Naomi hated Alfons. Hated the way he talked, his arrogance, his horrible mustache, his malicious grin when killing innocent people, and the content he expressed ( Read more... )

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sway05 September 23 2009, 16:11:49 UTC

this is different,and very interesting.looking forward to the next chapter :)

theatrebob1 October 5 2009, 03:01:37 UTC

thank you!

dizzyok September 23 2009, 16:53:25 UTC

Dude, this is fucking incredible so far. \o/
Does flow better without the german.

Waiting to see how many people implode from this.
Thomas and Emily are paired up and Naomi had a wicked case of wife beater syndrome on Emily as well.
Surely heads will roll. :)

Bad that I still love your ultra violent and twisted Naomi? Considering she's screwed up and you want to fix her justifies it, yeah?:D

Hopefully nobody crucifies you for the content.
Great job. Thanks

theatrebob1 October 5 2009, 03:04:37 UTC

Thank you!!!

Yeah it does, and it was a little ridiculous that i was going to write everything that Naomi said in german... like... really?

Naw, not that bad. Yeah, that's exactly it. Also i might be fucking around with the idea of Nature vs. Nurture?

hahaha I hope so.

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

dizzyok October 5 2009, 05:58:29 UTC

Can count to twenty in german, and there are a few words and phrases I picked up off Rammstein. So, I would have no clue what it actually would have said anyway... monkeys in Paris? :D

Nature vs. Nurture should be great. Getting bored reading about it in context of, like, real people. Whatever Dahmer, it's not an excuse, though that was a fascinating idea.

Good luck!
super duper amounts of excited

artemis_malvoti September 23 2009, 17:40:21 UTC

I'm really excited to see what you can do with this story.

I've never seen a Emily/Thomas pairing and I wonder how Naomily will come out of this.

theatrebob1 October 5 2009, 03:05:20 UTC

thank you!

Ah, tis' a mystery. :)

ejm137 September 25 2009, 06:12:45 UTC

Hmm, interesting...definitly not like any other Naomily story. I do seem to keep reading everything with a psuedo german accent, makes for it being a bit weird in my head!!!

theatrebob1 October 5 2009, 03:05:46 UTC

HAHAHAHAH That made me laugh so hard. I would imagine that that would be quite weird... ahahahahahah

ejm137 October 6 2009, 06:58:36 UTC

yeah, my head is a bit odd...I guess I should sort this out!! Glad I made you laugh, you definitely manage to make me laugh!! Nothing like a mutual appreciation site here!! ha Ha

microwavedshit September 25 2009, 11:29:07 UTC

wow Naomi has always been my favorite character and you've managed to make me hate her here like a lot man :O

theatrebob1 October 5 2009, 03:07:05 UTC

muahahahhahahahahaha. Well you might like her in later chapters...?