Realistic Chapter 9

[theartoffic]

Title: Realistic - Chapter 9/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel real

Comments

[alchemie]

You've posted another chapter! Yay! I want to go back and reread from the beginning so I can prolong this experience as much as possible!

♥

[theartoffic]

oh, that makes me feel so good! :D So does seeing your icon! *hearts* :D

[itstonedme]

This was an amazing chapter! The reunion, the revelation, there is so much that turned in this chapter. I love Elijah's development, his experimentation in trying new behaviours on for size just for the freedom of it: the potty mouth, the sloppy housekeeping. In an age where mankind is becoming more robotic, the robot who is becoming more human is an interesting premise. Please, please keep these coming! ♥

[theartoffic]

hehehe I had to give this Elijah a potty mouth *g* :D. I'm so glad you're enjoying! *hearts* :D

[ph34rmoi]

Wow, honey, you should have been here to hear my "YAYYYYYYYY!!!! YAYYYYYYY!!!!" at seeing an update. =)

This was absolutely stunning. Orlando finally can understand Elijah... Elijah is learning what it's like to be himself... all part of a recipe for major squeege! So SQUEEEEE!!! And there are more things that I love! I shall elaborate:

For some reason I love it a lot a lot when Elijah stutters. I think it's because he's, well, a Realistic, and if he were /just/ machinery emotions wouldn't have that effect on him. He's just so real, with such raw emotions.. ah. I never knew I could love him more but now I know! <3

And the image of nakies!Elijah with only his jeans around his knees? Talk about hothotHOT! And then touching himself for the first time? Well, I believe some new panties are in order for me.

Obliterate everything but this.exe is brilliant--must have been installed when Orlando first plugged into him! Heehee I just re-read Crossword and all the talk of Orlando "connecting" with Elijah brought that phrase to

[ph34rmoi]

WOW I didn't realize my comment was so long. Sorries! =(

[theartoffic]

awww, honey, I love your squee! I'm so glad to be able to write something that made you feel that way! It's a great honor :D. I always loved that clip of Elijah running and jumping into Orlando's arms at one of the premiers so that is exactly what the homecoming scene was culled from. *happy sighs* I'm so, so glad that you're enjoying this sweetness! Hope you're doing okay! *hugs* <3

[ph34rmoi]

Just to let you know, I will /always/ be doing AWESOME with you around. =)

*cuddles*

just three words

[frodo4ever]

You. Are. Brilliant!

Re: just three words

[theartoffic]

I wish I were! But I am glad that you enjoyed it! :D

[verangel]

From the beginning, I was in love with the apparent changes in Elijah. His love of swearing. The way he was frustrated with that ship but relaxed and busy. He has so much emotion. The visual of him pouncing on Orlando (who I was SO GLAD to see returned) and rubbing himself on him, all the packages and pictures everywhere

[theartoffic]

hee! I had to have Elijah have a love for swearing lol. And that pounce ... that was taken right from that great Orlijah crotchmash vid clip. At least that's how I pictured it *happy sighs*

Poor Elijah, he's been through so much *pets him*. And after all this time he is finally getting to be himself. I am really and truly honored that you are enjoying this so much!! *hugs & adores you* <3