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Realistic Chapter 7

Feb 11, 2009 22:39

Title: Realistic - Chapter Seven
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel ( Read more... )

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verangel February 12 2009, 03:47:19 UTC

Oh great! Just took cough suppressant for a sinus infection. Codeine. :( *whimpers* love my Realistic. xoxoxoxo v

theartoffic February 12 2009, 15:59:43 UTC

ohhh I hope you feel better soon V! *pets you*

verangel February 14 2009, 00:50:06 UTC

work and still sick. Not able to concentrate. I printed tonight to read this rich and somewhat sad dialogue over. From my first read (with too many interruptions) it tore at me with Elijah's comparisons of the past and deep rooted fear of what others would expect of him, and that vulnerable plea to be with Orlando, and not alone. His fear of Orlando falling in love and away from him. AND...I was horrified that knowing there is a black trade market for Realistics, Orlando would let Elijah walk by himself (to watch out for it happening). He is small and beautiful.
I love this story so much. More when I can digest fully...Happy Valentine's day! love and hugs xoxoxo v

theartoffic February 14 2009, 17:09:39 UTC

awww I'm so sorry you're not feeling good! I hope you get to relax today and get better! Oh yes, there's a heavy trade for Realistics - those who can't get them want them. I hope you have a happy Valentine's day! *smooches*

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theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:00:58 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I hope staying up to read it didn't cause your insomnia tho. I hope you managed to get some sleep! *hugs*

syllamon February 12 2009, 06:38:55 UTC

Had to read this right away.. or as soon as I saw it anyway.. Poor poor Elijah "hugs" great angst and I love Tara and her happy tipsyness.

theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:02:44 UTC

Hehehe, I'm so glad you liked tipsy Tara ;) and the angst. I loves me some angst (can't you tell? *g*) Thank you so much for reading! *hugs*

ismenin February 12 2009, 09:41:42 UTC

This is a great story - so different! I am really enjoying all the many facets of Elijah's personality - if you can call it that. An inanimate object becoming animate, then sentient. Fantastic! Thank you! xxxx

theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:03:41 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading! :D *hugs*

arabia764 February 12 2009, 11:54:02 UTC

I wish I hadn't read this so I could read it for the first time now.....

does that make sense?

theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:05:21 UTC

hee! It does make sense! And it's way more polished now so it would have been better to wait but I know you! Plus I needed someone to tell me if the idea was any good so that fell on you ;). *hugs & adores*

arabia764 February 12 2009, 16:08:59 UTC

And now you're returning the favour - I can't tell you how much I appreciate that.